WiP in WiP, post your screenshots!
- Thread starter Arhurt
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That looks really great corv! The interior design is fantastic but the wood floor you went for might not be the best choice. It looks like I'd stub my toe on all of the beams when walking across it, and floors generally never look like that; that wood is meant for walls AFAIK. I would replace it with the bridge's wood used in the image below. The lighting is bad but It would look fine in your scene.
edit: sniped by 7 minutes :V
edit: sniped by 7 minutes :V
Really like how this ceiling turned out.
Does this look better?
Nice brushwork doors you can't spawncamp:
Also did this room but I worry I made it waaaay too bright. Gonna get rid of some of these lights or dim them down a lot.
Poster looks nice though
That's awesome. I love how detailed the walls are, so many supports and beams and things. And the little detail scenes, like how the shovel rack has an additional shovel lying down next to it.
The metal texture on the spawn doors seems a bit odd though; lots of dots. Maybe replace it with a "smoother" one? Just a thought.
Wood can support concrete, but it's unusual, and would probably only ever be done for a situation where the platform's function needed a smooth surface, like a driveway (the only time I can recall seeing this myself, as it turns out).
I could see it being necessary in this case, as it appears large-ish items are being lifted by crane onto the platform and moved around, presumably by hand or hand truck. Wood floors aren't great for wheels.
Nice brushwork doors you can't spawncamp:
I think the metal texture you use for the trims here is a bit noisy - i'd recommend using one of the flat beam textures instead, or even the same "metal slats" texture for the door, turned sideways/scaled/adjusted to fit.
- Oct 11, 2013
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IIRC that material is most used for the inside of a roof rather than floors. wood/wood_bridge001 would look nicer
this bot forgot that if you touch the intel you lose your disguise
map:https://tf2maps.net/downloads/kill-zone-express.2693/ p.s. the map in the picture is a2 and not the map available at the link
map:https://tf2maps.net/downloads/kill-zone-express.2693/ p.s. the map in the picture is a2 and not the map available at the link
Building here could make it less open (though I dont know what's behind the camera)
Directly below the frame is an open void, ready for a building. Thanks for supporting your local Uncuepa, feel free to enjoy any and all of his crap!
I need suggestions on how to fix this staircase, its for a detailing practice map.
The idea is that its a hallway, and this staircase leads to a door, kind of like a ceiling drop down door but it slides. Kinda like an attic door.
well for one you should look at some reference images of those kinds of staircases, you'll see that they arent big chunky minecraft blocks like that, theyre thinner and have either an edge or something holding them up.
honestly looking at reference images is generally a must and will solve most detail problems
honestly looking at reference images is generally a must and will solve most detail problems
That is one thin hallway -
also a little weird how the first set of stairs has a base but the second of the same material has no underneath
also a little weird how the first set of stairs has a base but the second of the same material has no underneath
The hallway is normal sized actually
I'm trying to get better at using brushwork to detail, rather then props. (given my last 2 detail entries to contests were called prop libraries and prophunt maps)
the doorframes look really thick and awkward
honestly in response to the brushwork thing I'd recommend making your blank brushwork look nicer, right now you're just detailing a long thin box, if the geo you started with was more complex you'd end up with some much nicer results
(also probably learn when to use simplicity, rn it seems like you think no wall should be left blank)
honestly in response to the brushwork thing I'd recommend making your blank brushwork look nicer, right now you're just detailing a long thin box, if the geo you started with was more complex you'd end up with some much nicer results
(also probably learn when to use simplicity, rn it seems like you think no wall should be left blank)