The wood framing looks alright. It's a bit noisy and i would maybe tone it down a bit. These windows all individually call attention to themselves, so I'd start by removing them first. Not every building would have them anyways, especially where the building steps back and the roof window isn't actually in a proper attic (but instead appears to be coming out of a floor that is half the height it should be, or is a clerestory window to the floor below).
This vent doesn't belong here, it's far too pristine to be outside and also isn't an appropriate size (most air intake/outtake vents are very large because they serve the entire building. They have to be sized for the air flow of the entire building as opposed to a vent in a room which is sized to just that room's air flow. In theory you could have a vent like this and it would work but in practice it's probably very inefficient).
The floor decoration made sense in other screenshots (public plazas tend to have that sort of decorative tile work because they're meant to look nice) but I don't think it belongs in a place like this. Keep industrial areas simple.
Randomize your stair textures so they don't repeat obviously.
Is this quicksand?
It looks like there's a public plaza of sorts on the roof of these buildings, which is unusual. The buildings should probably just be walls instead because what tenant wants to put their business in that awkward and inflexible of a location?
It looks over-detailed because it's lit. Some maps have pretty intense ceiling beam work but you don't really get a good look at it because it's all in shadow.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Timber_framing#Half-timbering
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