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[BigBros]

That looks really smooth, i like it Also those models look cool.

 

[Fruity Snacks]

A little something I've been working on, that I'm comfortable showing off

Link if it doesn't work

 

[Dain]

Couch jumping works as well (they were the dain of my existence)

;o

 

[Pocket]

Also, "couch jumping." I am excited for koth_tomcruise.

 

[Freyja]

I got sick of the legs on these things never being the right height. So I made it modular. kinda.

 

[Fantaboi]

A little something I've been working on, that I'm comfortable showing off

Link if it doesn't work

These sightlines look waay to small, please make them a bit larger.

 

[Fantaboi]

[gfycat]WhichMelodicDromaeosaur[/gfycat]
Thoughts on this so far?

 

[xzzy]

It looks a bit distracting just based on that clip, but who knows, it might be fine in game.

I get where you're going with those pulsing clouds, but they do look weird if you watch them too long.

 

[wareya]

as ugly as all TF2 weather is

 

[Idolon]

The mist should be a lot less common, and maybe a bit slower. Either that, or more consistent, rather than dramatically pulsating. The rest looks fine.

EDIT: just noticed that there's some longer streaks of rain mixed in too. The fact that they're longer seems to imply that they'd move faster than the other rain drops, but they actually move slower? Kinda strange.

 

[Berry]

Incredible slow-gress artpassing Mudwater B.

It's only a fast so there's some quality issues in those pics probably.

 

[Idolon]

Looks really nice, Berry; I love the colors. You should bring some of the green from the out of bounds areas into the gameplay area with some small plants - look at how Hydro does its foliage.

Also, more chimneys.

EDIT: Maybe some dirt overlays under the water to show it a bit better?

 

[Another Bad Pun]

I would put some gutters on your roofs, like on dustbowl stage 3 (in some areas you could make your roofs more interesting in general, dustbowl has some crazy stuff going on its roofs. and it makes them look really neat.) That being said, the flat roof style is nice.

 

[Berry]

I would put some gutters on your roofs, like on dustbowl stage 3 (in some areas you could make your roofs more interesting in general, dustbowl has some crazy stuff going on its roofs. and it makes them look really neat.) That being said, the flat roof style is nice.

Honestly I've barely started detailing compared to what I want the B to be complete, and the left building in screenshot #2 has a gutter (I haven't gotten around to putting the rest on yet).

As for stuff on the roofs, I do think some metal sheets and tires could certainly make things better like dustbowl, or even just plain missing tiles.

Looks really nice, Berry; I love the colors. You should bring some of the green from the out of bounds areas into the gameplay area with some small plants - look at how Hydro does its foliage.

Also, more chimneys.

EDIT: Maybe some dirt overlays under the water to show it a bit better?

Same again about the detail, but yeah, more chimneys, stuff going on with the roofs + the foliage and dirt overlays to show the puddle more all sound like good ideas.

 

[Inqwel]

In addition to whats been said, that second picture with the 4 pipes all in a row: add a little variation to the heights.

 

[Crash]

Beautiful

 

[Moonfixer]

A few screenshots of my map koth_outskirts a1.
http://forums.tf2maps.net/showthread.php?t=23440

 

[puxorb]

It looks great Aman! But perhaps a bit overscaled. If you use the control point as a reference then the entire area looks pretty large. But I love the height differences and your inside areas look interesting. Reminds me a lot of koth_king.

 

[Moonfixer]

It looks great Aman! But perhaps a bit overscaled. If you use the control point as a reference then the entire area looks pretty large. But I love the height differences and your inside areas look interesting. Reminds me a lot of koth_king.

Thank you. I will work on the scaling. Also I'm happy that the map reminds you of Koth_king because aesthetically that is what half of this map is supposed to be going for. The other half being aesthetically reminiscent to foundry perhaps.

 

[Spipper]

Doing a bit of detailing on Red's spawn:

The Future Of Pollution: