WiP in WiP, post your screenshots!

[YM]

It also appears to be projecting backwards which is totally wrong since that's a highly directional light source. It definitely wouldn't cast on the ceiling either.

 

[EArkham]

That train... is just... very oddly placed. The rest is quite nice.

"It wasn't a bad job, loading cargo from the warehouse to the railway. That changed when Gate Five was put in. There were objections immediately upon even the suggestion, due to the close proximity and frequent use of the #7 train line, but the foreman would have none of it. All protests were met with his hurriedly muttering something about 'the train god demands blood and blood he shall have.' And ever since, when the #7 rolled in at breakneck speeds, came not the usual satisifaction of a job well done and a cargo car fair loaded to destinations far away, but the stark and closely held terror of having to cross the dreaded tracks at Gate Five."

 

[Ravidge]

"It wasn't a bad job, loading cargo from the warehouse to the railway. That changed when Gate Five was put in. There were objections immediately upon even the suggestion, due to the close proximity and frequent use of the #7 train line, but the foreman would have none of it. All protests were met with his hurriedly muttering something about 'the train god demands blood and blood he shall have.' And ever since, when the #7 rolled in at breakneck speeds, came not the usual satisifaction of a job well done and a cargo car fair loaded to destinations far away, but the stark and closely held terror of having to cross the dreaded tracks at Gate Five."

Make a SFM movie, this script is gold.

 

[Tarry H Sruman]

I second this.

 

[Micnax]

Make a SFM movie, this script is gold.

Someone do it in the voice of Richard Burton and I'll be right on it:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tFfZFvvuXWc

 

[YM]

This idea is getting better and better by the minute

 

[Godling]

Someone do it in the voice of Richard Burton and I'll be right on it:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tFfZFvvuXWc

Considering the workplace environment, I'd go for Sam Elliott over Burton for sure.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uL8CewpXe3I

 

[Tarry H Sruman]

 

[Another Bad Pun]

I'm trying to take inspiration from fastlane here. Not turning out how i thought it would

 

[Fruity Snacks]

Feels kind of wide.

 

[tyler]

Why would you take inspiration from one of the most underdetailed TF2 maps?

 

[ForbiddenDonut]

I don't know about too wide - Fastlane (which, for the record, is really a bad map to take inspiration from either aesthetically or gameplay-wise) has much wider areas than that.

Those buildings could really stand to be taller. They are short and unmemorable.

 

[Freyja]

 

[YM]

Suddenly noticed how purple her underarms are. she needs to try some moisturiser or something

 

[Tom Hoen]

Feedback and comments please. Do you think it's too big? Boring? How about the texture. Is it good?

I'll paint something on that canvas soon.

 

[Freyja]

If you're going to be painting on the canvas, I think it'll be fine. Perhaps the frame could use a darker-brown, more wood-like, but it'll probably be fine with a painting.

 

[Leminnes]

*Looks at name of subforum*

One of these things is not like the other.

 

[Fruity Snacks]

Suddenly noticed how purple her underarms are. she needs to try some moisturiser or something

or stop using that dyed womens deodorant. I know it smells lovely like a fresh spring morning in the alps, but that color can't be healthy.

 

[MangyCarface]

 

[ScorpioUprising]

Feedback and comments please. Do you think it's too big? Boring? How about the texture. Is it good?

I'll paint something on that canvas soon.

If you wanted to be appropriately meta, having the painting be a picture of a heavy would be pretty rad.