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phi

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[ wip and shitty lighting and a lot of useless/not-deleted-yet geometry ]

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Lain

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making a 5cp map while i wait on HH gameday for feedback on Satori, and while i fixed up foundry last based on reddit feedback threads and comp matches, I am still stuck on what to do with the second. What do people think of this second?

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I feel like it is missing something..
 

Lain

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finally got a second i (kinda) like! gonna be working on mid now, mostly taking queues from Foundry and Gullywash, hope it turns out well.
 

Kraken

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I've made a prop for the tower but I'm having a hard time deciding whether the design really fits in visually:

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I think it looks too noisy and has too sharp looking texture.
 

Kube

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I've made a prop for the tower but I'm having a hard time deciding whether the design really fits in visually:
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I'd say that the prop looks excellent, but you might have to rework the tower's brushwork to make the tower's function clear.

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In the end, you might just want to bring the clock to the top portion of the tower, and making the clock portion larger(?), even though I would argue it looks good in the place it is now.

I'm very excited to see such a polished Medieval style!
 
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Kube

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Reduced the details on the clock:
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Oh, that's certainly better. Scrap what I said earlier about the placement of the clock, this version looks great where it is.
 

Another Bad Pun

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Maybe I'm wrong, but I feel like a clock tower makes the most sense when it is high up and can be seen by most of the town. I guess the point needs to have a landmark, but a clock tower like that where only a few people in the street can see it seems strange. Although... that's just assumption. It might be really common.

EDIT: Or maybe the tower in the picture can be seen by most people. I can't really tell for sure
 
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Yacan1

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I would suggest more yellowish brush strokes and maybe small stains coming from the numbers. It just looks very clean for an old German town.
 

Pocket

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Yeah, if there's a tower, then the clock definitely needs to be at the top part of it. So swap it out with the windows you have higher up.

Also, metal roof is probably a no-no.