It doesn't make much sense for those tires to be stacked up on that upper balcony.Some detailing on Supply
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Somewhere that they would be easily accessible to a vehicle.
Hey hey hey, don't question TF2's logic on where to store tires. They're not easily accessible from Sawmill's big building's room either and you don't hear people complain about that.
The lighting on that door made it look open from the thumbnail. Try disabling self-shadowing on it.
Never mind the tires - that balcony doesn't make sense to exist at all. I'd remove the tires add a ladder so that the door functions as roof access.
I'm not sure if you're referring to the tires on the roof of the building or tires within the building that I wasn't able to find. If it's the former, tires are a common object used to weigh down loose pieces of roof so that they don't rattle or blow away in the wind.
I can't think of much atm, but on the first picture (ending with 229_1), the roof texture should be turned 90 degrees, looks odd having long strips sideways instead of numerous tiles.
The cross-brace that's been lifted to fit the door wouldn't work very well structurally. Typically this sort of situation is handled by just fitting the door in to the bottom gap under the cross-brace. If that doesn't fit, then you can remove one of the diagonals and fit the door in that way.
The way this wall runs right into the side of the building looks really strange. Which one was built first? Why doesn't the wall just go around the building?
The window texture stops a bit early. I assume this is so that the grey concrete stripe can show its full texture, but it cuts the window texture off and also doesn't line up with the horizontal lines on the neighboring pieces of concrete.
Putting barbed wire fence right up against a cliff makes it a lot worse at keeping people out.
You've got a good color scheme going with the greys/green/brown wood, but I don't think this metal sheet fits. Maybe see if the red roof sheets fit better, or lay some wood planks up against the walls instead.
Giving some new light to my very first map, layouts' completely new, but kept some aspects I guess. Likely going to upload an in-game shot later. (totally not muddy's 4cp prefab in the background)
Brush pushin'
*Monologue Time* KOTH and CP with a similar setpiece, built with the intention to see if I could make something that roughly approximates a map in a short span of time, which would appear to be the case. I have found that intuiting scale manually instead of cramming everything in a 2048*2048 box has helped make things feel more natural, if slightly too big. So that's cool.
I have sketched a KOTH layout which I plan to make for the 72 Hour Jam, after that I will try to finish a fucking map. Between the above and my Detail Contest Entry, I think I have learned enough to put together a low-to-mid-tier workshop also-ran.
*Monologue Time* KOTH and CP with a similar setpiece, built with the intention to see if I could make something that roughly approximates a map in a short span of time, which would appear to be the case. I have found that intuiting scale manually instead of cramming everything in a 2048*2048 box has helped make things feel more natural, if slightly too big. So that's cool.
I have sketched a KOTH layout which I plan to make for the 72 Hour Jam, after that I will try to finish a fucking map. Between the above and my Detail Contest Entry, I think I have learned enough to put together a low-to-mid-tier workshop also-ran.
