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[Another Bad Pun]

I took an old spawn I made and added some additional detail to it, (got rid of some stuff too.) Not sure how I feel about the rafters. I also fixed the welding box for steam chat, (which you can't see.)

Could use some help, too:
I'm not sure what water texture to use for this ocean. Touching the water kills the player, so it needs to look deadly, but it also needs to like like a normal ocean. If this isn't obvious enough, I could make the fall larger. Last resort would be to get rid of it entirely, and I really don't want to do that. Thoughts maybe?

 

[chemelia]

I took an old spawn I made and added some additional detail to it, (got rid of some stuff too.) Not sure how I feel about the rafters. I also fixed the welding box for steam chat, (which you can't see.)

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Could use some help, too:
I'm not sure what water texture to use for this ocean. Touching the water kills the player, so it needs to look deadly, but it also needs to like like a normal ocean. If this isn't obvious enough, I could make the fall larger. Last resort would be to get rid of it entirely, and I really don't want to do that. Thoughts maybe?

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You could put those yellow biohazard barrels floating in the water. If that isn't really the theme you're going for, a longer fall is the only other thing that I think would make sense.

 

[Egan]

Make it so it detects where the player falls and Sparkwire's shark model then pops up and makes a blood particle splash. And then just have shark fins swimming around occasionally. Would be like the sharks in Jak & Daxter / Ratchet & Clank.

 

[Idolon]

20 brush challenge!

 

[wareya]

I took an old spawn I made and added some additional detail to it, (got rid of some stuff too.) Not sure how I feel about the rafters. I also fixed the welding box for steam chat, (which you can't see.)
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I like the way it looks all over, but those support beams across the ceiling are totally wrong, that texture is wrong and I know it's a fitting color but please use a wood texture that doesn't have a second layer of wood supporting it. It really does look good all over, but that's just weird. Sorry if i come off as rude, i'm very tired (literally got out of bed 5 minutes ago) and can't think properly.

 

[Sergis]

nice spaceboat idolon

 

[Seba]

I'd like to see you do better von doom

edit: beat this nerd

 

[seth]

Could use some help, too:
I'm not sure what water texture to use for this ocean. Touching the water kills the player, so it needs to look deadly, but it also needs to like like a normal ocean. If this isn't obvious enough, I could make the fall larger. Last resort would be to get rid of it entirely, and I really don't want to do that. Thoughts maybe?

You could put a low railing on the edge of the walkway to let people know that crossing the railing may have some consequences.

 

[Bakscratch]

got bored started to detail Ripley.

 

[seth]

20 brush challenge!

That blue environment lighting is sick. Is that UE4?

 

[Ælement]

It's clearly a practice world within the ANIMUS

 

[YM]

Bak! No! Stop!

Ripley has big problems and will need a lot of work, you shouldn't be detailing yet D:

 

[Idolon]

That blue environment lighting is sick. Is that UE4?

HL2DM with scale 2 lightmaps and color correction. Thanks though!

 

[Dr. Sasha]

The portal file...
It scares me
(unless its func_detailed)

P.S. How did you not get any invalid solid errors?

 

[Bakscratch]

Bak! No! Stop!

Ripley has big problems and will need a lot of work, you shouldn't be detailing yet D:

Don't worry its only the spawn. For now

I need more feedback, as I don't know what to do really next.

 

[Seba]

The portal file...
It scares me
(unless its func_detailed)

P.S. How did you not get any invalid solid errors?

I didn't even bother looking at the portal file since the whole thing is surrounded by an enormous func_viscluster, but yeah it probably is pretty bad. Invalid solids were avoided by carefully vertexediting planes and alt-p'ing after every change.

 

[YM]

*shrugs* the portalfile is largely irrelevant for something like that. Pretty much can't be optimised, so why bother? Just func_detail it all

 

[wareya]

Did someone say nonorthogonal geometry?

 

[nightwatch]

Did someone say nonorthogonal geometry?

Too easy to tell where the grid is, not as impressive 3/10

 

[wareya]

>implying that's on-grid