WiP in WiP, post your screenshots!

[Seba]

They'll look better if you make each vertical support run the entire height of the room, not end awkwardly between horizontal ones. That both looks strange and is structurally unsound.

 

[LeSwordfish]

Also thats a fuck of a lot of candles for a place that could just put in electric lights since apparently the tree is a generator.

 

[Zed]

Yeah, those wires aren't going anywhere off of the tree...

 

[Shanghai]

Also thats a fuck of a lot of candles for a place that could just put in electric lights since apparently the tree is a generator.

But the whole joke is the "WARNING: Flammable Materials" sign is next to about 10 candles.

 

[phi]

Sneak peek for detail pass #1 of cp_wetland:

I also have a question: is that big red undetailed trainstation/clocktower in pic 2 too overstated and prominent to be on a flank? I feel like it might attract attention to the area, which is good because it's a woefully underused route, it just also might be too attractive.

I'm thinking of putting a point in the area to maybe give the map more spice: make it into an A > B+C > D map, maybe, I dunno.

Thoughts?

 

[Dr. Sasha]

I think the whole tunnel idea is fine, but the tower building atop looks like it's trying to hog up all the attention

It looks a smidge out of place, possibly decrease its detail or think of a standart roof

 

[Harribo]

I would wonder how many people notice it at all tbh Deer, will be interesting to see, though most regular testers read this thread I imagine and that spoil the results considerably. I'm not into the idea of a 1-2-1 A/D map but that's only because I like the previous versions and think you'll do well in making ironing out it's problems and making a fun stock A/D map.

 

[ibex]

( I don't think anyone looks up enough to notice)
Right now it feels oddly tall, but I'm sure detailing will fix that.

My opinion for the 1-2-1 would be splitting teams = bad.

 

[phi]

Yeah all the balancing I've done so far has been linear/stock 3cp based so yeah, the 1-2-1 isn't the best idea haha. I'll figure something out, maybe move the clocktower to last point as to make it more impressive of an area to fight over.

 

[Fantaboi]

[gfycat]PastelTartFlatfish[/gfycat]

Probably will add a shockwave at the end of it, and align the explosions.
But this is koth_backwoods ending

 

[UKCS-Alias]

Those lasers to me look a bit weak (they are barely visible at a distance). I would make them go wider which indicates the added power it gains that triggers the explosion.

And maybe even perform some effect similar to doomsday's explosion which i think adds some color correction. This would help to indicate the explosion being closer as now the explosion only happens in the skybox.

Also, kill those below it

 

[Gadget]

Changed the lighting to night because I was planning to make a halloween version anyway.

 

[UKCS-Alias]

Not every night map has to be a halloween map. Regular (or medieval) night maps are still welcome.

 

[puxorb]

OH MY GOD this is perfect! Good work Gadget!

+276087640810627460871

 

[Crash]

 

[TyeZenneth]

That looks a helluva lot better than your first iteration, if you don't mind me saying.

 

[Crash]

From the original 72hr version? Yeah, I made that one as almost an afterthought in the last bit of time I was working on it.

 

[TyeZenneth]

From the original 72hr version? Yeah, I made that one as almost an afterthought in the last bit of time I was working on it.

Yeah, that one.
It's nice, now.

 

[Fantaboi]

[gfycat]FreshForthrightBrownbear[/gfycat]

 

[re1wind]

The model of the jumpad is a bit big. flatten it out like a pancake would almost certainly look better.

Also, why would such an apparently high-tech thing be located in a dirty, rural -uasi-industrial area?