WiP in WiP, post your screenshots!

[keeks]

you need some artwork on the walls - they look kind of plain

nvm im retarded found them

 

[keeks]

revised spawn:

is the 2nd resupply cabinet too much? idk what else to put in corner

 

[Grizzly Berry]

revised spawn:

is the 2nd resupply cabinet too much? idk what else to put in corner

Don't worry too much about filling up the spawn. Players will only be in there for a few seconds anyway and it doesn't need to be beautifully detailed.

To me, it looks like you could cut off a big chunk of your spawn by moving your spawn points forward a little bit.

 

[dustmotes]

Just some drawings for a map I'm going to maybe make. I tried to make a post in the map workshop but it kept going to a blank page when I tried to preview or publish it.

I know, I'm really gifted at drawing.

 

[Egan]

I would also try to think of areas not just as visually striking points, but also from the gameplay perspective: as a player, as your best class, what areas seem important in the gametype, what areas do you look out for, what areas do you have the most fun playing repeatedly over and over - try putting these in your map somehow. Cause while Nucleus has a great idea of a visually striking aesthetic, personally I can't honestly say I've had any fun playing that map.

 

[Fruity Snacks]

Weird lighting and shadows. I'll fix that up later.

 

[Sel]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R6D86_3cq2Q

 

[Grizzly Berry]

Reworked mid of my 72hr map. Aly talked me into changing the theme. I'd have to agree, it look a lot better.

 

[Prestige]

looks and probably plays so much better wow

 

[Freyja]

#JustMessingAround

 

[Penguin]

hrrng

 

[Exactol]

My eyes are already crying from the daytime version ;_;

 

[re1wind]

...Beautiful


Some minor issues that sprung out at me; the water and what looks like clouds attract a fair amount of attention, as they --especially the waterfall-- seem to be lit up by some light source that only affects them; the candles could use a bit more intensity to improve the scene; a light at the top and bottom of the lantern should help with soft light in the scene.

my :2cents:

 

[insane3004]

Still so much that needs to be done...

 

[Sergis]

that looks interesting

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/2347130/pacific_pack/suijin/exp/2014-02-03_00006.jpg[IMG]

#JustMessingAround[/QUOTE]

looks biuriful on my laptop, but i cant see shit on my work pc :D

 

[Fish 2.0]

 

[Fruity Snacks]

Some tweeks left on the lighting and such (Maybe a bit bright?). Then some scripting for GladOS dialogue and we'll be good to go.

 

[Snowbat]

Some screenshots of my MvM map in progress. No trees and details yet and the lighting as well as the skybox are not as they should be neither. Plus I also plan to add a 3D skybox, but this is just to already give an idea of the setting:

Bot spawn area:

Second area:

Area near the hatch:

Far from being totally done, but I'd like to have a raw version ready so that we can at least start making the missions.

 

[Shanghai]

It seems very open and empty - there aren't really a lot of buildings or interesting features. Look at some of the official MvM maps, they all have lots of height variation and things to block lines of sight.
I also can't really tell yet but it seems very overscaled?

 

[Another Bad Pun]

Since portal mapping is a thing now: