WiP in WiP, post your screenshots!
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That might literally be the weirdest thing out of this community since rexy was around.
Geisundheit.
Your architecture looks really cool!
However, the 2nd and 3rd picture points look REALLY DULL. The area's flat, and the points aren't the focus. Maybe see if you can spice up those areas gameplay wise, give the points the attention!
Also, I feel like the colour pallete of the map is a little bit too green. Maybe try for some more constrasting colors. Side-recognition is very hard at the moment.
Is this an A/D map or a 5CP like thing?
However, the 2nd and 3rd picture points look REALLY DULL. The area's flat, and the points aren't the focus. Maybe see if you can spice up those areas gameplay wise, give the points the attention!
Also, I feel like the colour pallete of the map is a little bit too green. Maybe try for some more constrasting colors. Side-recognition is very hard at the moment.
Is this an A/D map or a 5CP like thing?
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MacRipley
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This is A/D, and yeah i might tone down the cc it currently has. alot of the aesthetic stuff is still under development since im more focused on getting the paths and gameplay down. you can even see the respawn rooms dont have doors yet, and a lot of parts are lacking lighting too.
also there are custom sky cards
also there are custom sky cards
takabuschik
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I like it. But it's so so green! Do you use some sort of color correction?
I like the look of thgreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeenfirst post here
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lighting taken from mountainlab and will probably get changed soon. Also, thats my first map (excluding orange maps) and post on this forum
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I genuinely thought that was mountainlab when I scrolled over the first screenshot. Then I looked in better detail.
I like the use of the tank in the last shot.
I like the use of the tank in the last shot.
Lampenpam
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This really feels like mountainlab. The setting, the lighting, a very thin ramp and some details like the tank at the ceiling.
I like it since mountainlab is one of my favorite maps ^^
You might want to use advanced lighting settings to make the trees look better
I like it since mountainlab is one of my favorite maps ^^
You might want to use advanced lighting settings to make the trees look better
What a first post!
You've got some texture misalignment on some beams in the first image, I'm not sure about the sunken shipping container, that must be pretty squishy ground.
That retaining wall texture bottom left of screenshot #2 has some janky split going on and the beams along the mann co building have misaligned textures too.
Third SS has that brick building, it's ok, but it just looks off for some reason. Maybe add some brick beams or chamfer the edges so they're not too sharp?
Nothing to nitpick on in the final shot, all looks great.
You've got some texture misalignment on some beams in the first image, I'm not sure about the sunken shipping container, that must be pretty squishy ground.
That retaining wall texture bottom left of screenshot #2 has some janky split going on and the beams along the mann co building have misaligned textures too.
Third SS has that brick building, it's ok, but it just looks off for some reason. Maybe add some brick beams or chamfer the edges so they're not too sharp?
Nothing to nitpick on in the final shot, all looks great.
@up thanks for feedback, i will work on it
Shame the tank wasnt my idea. Im pretty sure i saw it on some other custom map.
Shame the tank wasnt my idea. Im pretty sure i saw it on some other custom map.
