WiP in WiP, post your screenshots!

[Idolon]

In your first screenshot, I noticed that the security fence has a gate (the section of fence with a black wheel underneath it). The gate is in a pretty awkward position to use, narrative-wise. I would flip that one section of fence around, so the gate is further right.

 

[Sergis]

nice wellnary

 

[The Asylum]

Now we wait for someone to make 2Grancrosswellukonlandsfort

 

[GPuzzle]

5Gravelbowlwardmountaintowerbinetionfrontdroductside.
Just wait.

EDIT: Why doesn't the -de connects to the rest of the most gigantic map name ever.

 

[Pocket]

I shamelessly stole that tag line for the promo, by the way.

Just as planned. :thumbup1:

In your first screenshot, I noticed that the security fence has a gate (the section of fence with a black wheel underneath it). The gate is in a pretty awkward position to use, narrative-wise. I would flip that one section of fence around, so the gate is further right.

You know, I always thought that prop was supposed to be a pair of doors that both swung open. But now that I see it up close, I see that it isn't... how the heck do the trucks drive onto the bridge in Double Cross, then?

 

[The Asylum]

Becuase the sheer awesomeness of "5Gravelbowlwardmountaintowerbinetionfrontdroductsi de" would cause the entire Internet to collapse, thus its true name must never be spoken.

Sorta like Voldemo-

 

[GPuzzle]

I'll give a prize to the one that find out what maps were used to create 5Gravelbowlwardmountaintowerbinetionfrontdroductside.

 

[Sel]

vents

vents everywhere

 

[The Asylum]

Needs more vents

 

[tyler]

Cut these down to 1 per inset wall. I would probably also remove the 2 piece wall vent on the left.

I also would not mix small vents and large vents. I like the idea of connectors, but removing the smalls would probably make it tidier and help to reduce prop usage overall.

that's my two cents

 

[LeSwordfish]

Align the glass texture in that last screenshot.

 

[Spacek531]

Apparently mercenaries really like their fresh air.

 

[Pocket]

Two points:

The ceiling vents with the linear slats are intended for the sides of ducts, and the ones with square slats are for the undersides.

The bottom step on each of those staircases is still shorter than the rest. That means either the steps are the wrong heights or the floor is off grid. Either way, it stands out like a sore thumb.

 

[Kill_the_Bug]

that's my two cents

I really expected you to say "That's my two vents worth."

 

[Sel]

Today I discovered hdr and color correction; also can someone please tell me why every rounded wall isn't lightning properly.

 

[Connect_Four]

It's not badlands

 

[Tarry H Sruman]

Clean and shiny as fuck

 

[Spacek531]

iny as fuck

I thought that kinda stuff was messy

 

[tyler]

Today I discovered hdr and color correction; also can someone please tell me why every rounded wall isn't lightning properly.

This looks much better. Get rid of those sprites on the fluorescent lights though, it just looks ridiculous. Your round stuff probably needs smoothing groups (I keep meaning to write a thing on how to use these because there's no guide at all, but I am not convinced I fully understand them myself). And ever since Steve pointed it out, your differently sized stairs are hurting me physically in real life.

 

[LeSwordfish]

IIRC, smoothing groups are pretty simple. I used them a lot back when i was portal mapping. Just select all the faces you want to smooth, hit "Smoothing groups" and then one of the numbers. Give them a unique number, and you're done.