WiP in WiP, post your screenshots!

[Rexy]

 

[grazr]

Nice bump mapping. A shame someone covered ceiling cat's hole.

 

[Crash]

Ok, other than obvious lame lighting issues, I think this is about complete.

 

[grazr]

you should use the actual ibeam version of the ibeam metal on 2 of the opposite sides of those frames. Not sure how far in development it is, but it'd look nicer that way (there is a white version IIRC).

 

[Crash]

Yeah that is a good idea, I forgot about that texture.

 

[Rexy]

 

[Fruity Snacks]

That blue color makes me feel awkward inside.

 

[Crash]

Makes me think of an elementary school.

 

[Ælement]

Im excited to see how this looks in 2 months

 

[Prestige]

i would never use that door, looks really vulnerable with like no cover. in fact, the whole area generally has little cover.

places that might need some cova http://dl.dropbox.com/u/7479925/Maps/cover.jpg might create some annoying sentries though...

 

[Ælement]

Thanks man. Nice to finally get some proper feedback

There are a some of the things i find myself agreeing with you on. Now its time to implement it!

 

[bob+M|M+]

still a loooooong way to go. *enters lockdown mode*

 

[Crash]

That looks really bad ass so far.

Feels sort of old-timey western almost.

 

[Shanghai]

I can't quite tell from the screenshot, but it looks like it might be too gray. Maybe mess with the environment lighting values?

 

[grazr]

I can't quite tell from the screenshot, but it looks like it might be too gray. Maybe mess with the environment lighting values?

I think it's more to do with the choice of textures. Whitewood, the washed out brown wood and blue roofs. Some of the brighter red metal panels would break that up a treat, not to mention a higher HDR value to up the contrast a bit. But i'm liking it a lot so far.

 

[Sergis]

I like how it looks. Something slightly different from TF2 standart, yet still close enough. Adding bright stuff risks making it look like every other TF2 map and we have plenty of that aesthetic already. I'd rather see something more unique.

 

[Crash]

I think using the lack of color to emphasize things like signage and control points would look really cool, personally. Objectives can stand out a ton.

 

[LeSwordfish]

I thought i'd replied to this but i don't see it. the tl:dr was basically: Cool. Kinda like upward. Upward contrasts its yellow wash with a bright blue sky, and i'd suggest doing something like that instead. Also i agree with crash on using colour to show objectives.

 

[Boylee]

I'm never going to get this finished in time...

 

[re1wind]

don't worry, neither will I.