I'm not sure if this is really a complaint but;
It looks fantastic, but it looks so overly neat. The boxes are stacked perfectly, the beams are all intact, the milk cans and the barrels stand upright exactly next to each other, the haybales are perfectly stacked - it's like someone's grandma went through it with a broom and a vacuum to make it all look prim and proper. It's a creepy kind of cleanliness, which is odd for a warzone where two teams who aren't farmers at all are battling each other.
It might be just me though, otherwise it's looking great.
No, you're right and i'm trying to work against it feeling too neat/methodical. There are some cases of wear and tear... but unlike the mining theme which better serves "messy up keep" the granary theme leaves much to the imagination in regards to a "run down facility". Beyond creating missing planks, missing (and quick fix) sheets of metal and strewn tires i'm not sure where else to go with it. Also it's not like there arn't any missing/skewed truss supports... there are plenty, all be it not in these specific shots.
I'll try and work on the wooden fences though as they are probably the most notably clean aesthetics (i think).
EDIT: just noticed several of my paint patches arn't working, i guess that'd help too...
I like the atmospheric fog volume, but it feels sort of strong for what appears to be a clear, sunny afternoon. I think there was some pink in the skybox to suggest it was early in the morning, it would look very attractive. Or maybe just tone the settings back a bit.
It is supposed to be early morning. Hence the ambience colour, fog colour, fog density and sun colour. Right before the sun rises and heats it up and away. I feel i've spent enough mornings waking up at 7am to an empty baby blue sky and gently fading ground fog in the hilly farmland of Devon to accurately portray it.
I'm not sure why you thought this was an afternoon with ground fog, the sun that low and a lack of yellow/orange tinted ambience. With no clouds it would be hard to tint the sky pink, but with clouds i negate the use of fog as the warmth the clouds collect prevents fog from forming in the first palce.