WiP in WiP, post your screenshots!

[The Asylum]

They told me to come in to work today.

They never said anything about actually doing work.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lJcLLZAxOsc&feature=youtu.be

Yeah i dunno about this guys. When I'm bored, my mind just... "goes places"

 

[ForbiddenDonut]

They told me to come in to work today.

They never said anything about actually doing work.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lJcLLZAxOsc&feature=youtu.be

Yeah i dunno about this guys. When I'm bored, my mind just... "goes places"

So, how fast did you give up on your "normal" TF2 map? I think you might have broken world records there.

 

[The Asylum]

asylum1 was pretty bad you know

still working on asylum2, but its nowhere near playable yet

 

[Tarry H Sruman]

I made a thing

 

[Seba]

I have no idea what the gray ground is supposed to be but I love everything about that.

 

[Tarry H Sruman]

Dirt from the gray rocks?

 

[LeSwordfish]

That's kinda not really how erosion works- anywhere but a really high erosion area, more dirt would be blown in my the wind than would come off the rock. Also, if that's the start place for a payload cart, it should probably be nearer the spawn.

 

[Freyja]

 

[Fredrik]

I made a thing

I like your thing.

 

[Tarry H Sruman]

That's kinda not really how erosion works- anywhere but a really high erosion area, more dirt would be blown in my the wind than would come off the rock. Also, if that's the start place for a payload cart, it should probably be nearer the spawn.

Don't you criticize the random excuses I pull out of my ass to justify stylistic choices.

But about the track, duly noted.

 

[Kill_the_Bug]

Stoneyridge

Looking really good Crash!

Sorry for delay in saying this - just got back from honeymmon.

 

[Crash]

Thanks!

Congrats, also!

 

[Spipper]

 

[LeSwordfish]

The chickenwire and boxes looks dumb. Otherwise, i rather like.

One thing that occured to me is that if you plan to make the "hill" natural and displaced, rather than sharp-cornered, it's probably better to do that sooner rather than later, to check it doesnt open up new sightlines when you round things off.

 

[Verno]

Actually pretty nice, you might want to break up the flat colour a little with some slightly smaller, subtle tonal variation and maybe a tiny weeny bit of noise too. Personally I don't think that typeface fits too well in the TF2 universe, it looks too postmodern. If you're going for something industrial then you're better off with a Geometric sans-serif like DIN or one of it's many variants.

I think its too late to change the font now (I created the text in a way where a font change is difficult) but I'll keep that in for the YLO (yellow) logo or if I decide to refresh the GRN logo significantly.

I actually think the color depth is fine, though it could use some complimentary colors like a creamy beige, similar to the circular red logo. I think you've done a good job keeping it simple, like early TF2.

Thats an interesting idea, I tried going with a brighter yellow earlier and didn't like it, but a duller yellow similar to Red's might be better, like this maybe

 

[Tarry H Sruman]

YOLO team

 

[Ælement]

Got rid on the deathpit and nerfed the upper route a bit.

 

[Boylee]

YOLO team

No.

 

[The Asylum]

YOLO is Carpe Diem for the uncultured swine

 

[Sel]