WiP in WiP, post your screenshots!

[Ælement]

I could be wrong, but it kinda looks like your carts are floating a bit too high above the tracks.

 

[TheKieranator]

I still need to fix some brushwork and then I can release this new dynamic door for testing. It might look like I got inspired by PDT but actually I got my inspiration from Space Hulk.

plr_blimprace

 

[Sel]

The teeth on the door look kinda silly.

 

[xzzy]

Those teeth look like the sort of thing that should be a prop rather than brushwork. Brushes don't let you work at a fine enough resolution for that kind of detail.

A prop would probably render faster too.

Speaking of props, a little bit of debris I was working on last night for stoneyridge:

 

[Ælement]

Those teeths aren't THAT fine brushwork that you should bother making models out of them...
It's a huge damn door after all, and each teeth has just as many sides as a cube.

And now that we're at it, i think it would look nicer if there was a space between the teeths. Like this:

 

[LeSwordfish]

Every time you remake that door it ends up looking more cramped and difficult to go through.

 

[Ælement]

Heueue

 

[Verno]

Here's something I've been working, how does it look? It's suppose to be a logo for a hypothetical Green team.

 

[Seba]

I liked the radio tower design more (the one you posted on FP). I'm not getting anything Radio-y out of this one.

 

[soylent robot]

plr map to blow up the GRN base before they can recruit mercenaries?

 

[The Asylum]

So I was doing things at work today.

Work was not chiefly among them.

 

[Ælement]

Is it wrong that i read the text on the side of the wagons as "Oreo"?

Other than that, very nicely drawn.

 

[The Asylum]

god damn it now i want some oreos

see what you've done

 

[soylent robot]

im still waiting for you to make a boxing ring that contains a slightly smaller boxing ring

 

[The Asylum]

Don't think I haven't thought of that before. Ever played Mortal Kombat: Armageddeon, perchance?

 

[GPuzzle]

im still waiting for you to make a boxing ring that contains a slightly smaller boxing ring

Boxing-ring-ception

 

[soylent robot]

Don't think I haven't thought of that before. Ever played Mortal Kombat: Armageddeon, perchance?

Nah, i prefer street fighter.
make a street to fight in outside the boxing ring place

 

[The Asylum]

I was actually likening it to the Pyramid of Argus in MK:Armageddeon. You know, this.

 

[Boylee]

Here's something I've been working, how does it look? It's suppose to be a logo for a hypothetical Green team.

Actually pretty nice, you might want to break up the flat colour a little with some slightly smaller, subtle tonal variation and maybe a tiny weeny bit of noise too. Personally I don't think that typeface fits too well in the TF2 universe, it looks too postmodern. If you're going for something industrial then you're better off with a Geometric sans-serif like DIN or one of it's many variants.

 

[tyler]

I actually think the color depth is fine, though it could use some complimentary colors like a creamy beige, similar to the circular red logo. I think you've done a good job keeping it simple, like early TF2.