WiP in WiP, post your screenshots!

[AgeNt_]

changed the lighting a bit to make it a bit cooler and changed the skybox to include some subtle blue sky into it

*EDIT* i forgot to turn the sun to fit the skybox, its facing the exact opposite way now. hmmm doesnt look real good now

 

[r3dn4x3l4]

Pretty new to posting here and this is one of the first maps I've made that is close to being finished.
Its still a w.i.p because it need to get it play tested more at some point as well as possible optimized.
Its a King Of The Hill map set in an abandoned asylum

let me know what you think, i have more screen shots which i can post or link if people are interested

edit: not sure why the other pictures seem to flux between working and not working, think its a steam thing

 

[Fruity Snacks]

Your last 3 image links are broken...

but the first image looks interesting... please, get those next 3 fixed,

 

[r3dn4x3l4]

here are the other two, interior shots of the mid area between the cp and spawn for both red and blu

sorry about the image problem, think its a steam thing

 

[lana]

 

[Fruity Snacks]

That mid looks interesting, but the red area is a very long sightline.

Perhaps put a wall with a door so that you can break that area up into 2 areas and break the sightline?

(And, that is a LOT of red textures, perhaps add some of the whiteish/gray concrete)

 

[r3dn4x3l4]

That mid looks interesting, but the red area is a very long sightline.

Perhaps put a wall with a door so that you can break that area up into 2 areas and break the sightline?

(And, that is a LOT of red textures, perhaps add some of the whiteish/gray concrete)

interesting idea, the mid picture are the literal outside spawn area for both red and blu respectively.
the red side does have alot of red textures and at the moment i not sure which textures will look best and fit as it were, i'll have to experiment with the texturing, thanks for the feedback btw

 

[English Mobster]

That first picture looks a tad dark. The rest look good, however.

 

[TheKieranator]

It does look good, but it'd be a shame if the layout/gameplay turned out bad and entire segments needed changing. People usually restrict themselves to dev textures and little actual detail until later in the development process. Hopefully it turns out fine :O

 

[Godslayer57]

r3dn4x3l4 what is that stretched looking thing in the last screenshot [bottom right]?

 

[grazr]

Soooooooon.

 

[Godslayer57]

That squared wooden planking around the crane just doesn't fit to me ..... feels like its floating there...
Maybe add some small attachments to the crane?

 

[grazr]

How do you mean? If you take a closer look the metal poles of the frame are actually intersecting the inner wooden frame of the catwalk and appear bolted in place.

 

[EArkham]

That web placement is jarring. A web in that spot wouldn't form like that on the wood; it'd be in the gaps of the mesh, so it looks weird. It jumped out at me as I was scrolling past pictures.

Otherwise, stuff is looking pretty spiffy.

 

[Seba]

I still hate the second to last point but that's just my opinion and you should ignore it. Did you compile with -staticproplighting? The conpack crane looks very oddly lit.

 

[r3dn4x3l4]

r3dn4x3l4 what is that stretched looking thing in the last screenshot [bottom right]?

not really sure what you're referring to but its probably part of the stairs that leads up to the second floor

 

[grazr]

I still hate the second to last point but that's just my opinion and you should ignore it. Did you compile with -staticproplighting? The conpack crane looks very oddly lit.

Well it's not entirely my choice since the map is essentially a port and i especially need to keep the CP's relatively similar to the original map design. It certainly wouldn't be my personal choice but i'm trying my best to compromise during the conversion.

Also the crane's lighting is fixed in my current version.

That web placement is jarring. A web in that spot wouldn't form like that on the wood; it'd be in the gaps of the mesh, so it looks weird. It jumped out at me as I was scrolling past pictures.

Otherwise, stuff is looking pretty spiffy.

Yes and no, i know what you're saying as i've seen that kind of things in parks but i've also seen 5x5ft spiderwebs off a frame, inches away from a brick wall. I really wanna tell the spider he'll not have much luck even if he has a massive web but spiders are kinda dumb like that.

 

[lana]

And this is the room where we store the air.

 

[Godslayer57]

And this is the room where we store the air.

Maybe add some magical pipes or a spytech room? A balacony?

 

[Fruity Snacks]

Maybe add some magical pipes or a spytech room? A balacony?

a vacuum.