your track still seems to suffer from lighting issues? but besides that, looking good! some cracks in yourdisplacements though ..
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Looking excellent of course. Only complaint is that red is a little too saturated to be slapped on top of the blue/grey metal. Try one of the lighter reds; anyone trying to paint that surface would try a patch with only 1/2 coats rather than the 4 or 5 it would take to convert to the current paint color on top of that dark metal surface.
/chuckle heartily at your mistake :
:(and the other day I was asking about skys for strata not hoodoo, this sky hasnt changed since the start)
whoa, just checked out some stats and this thread has had 60 more replies and 2000 more views than the thread for cp_bloodstained.. and hoodoo isnt even playable by the general public yet!!!
(uploading ..pretty_stage_2 to our server now, its taking a while its quite a hefty file and damn does it look beautiful with all the nice new vrad settings I know about ^^)
(uploading ..pretty_stage_2 to our server now, its taking a while its quite a hefty file and damn does it look beautiful with all the nice new vrad settings I know about ^^)
Looks incredible, Youme. Excellent work. A few questions/suggestions...
Is the sign going to have something on it? Right now it looks out of place.
There's a black gap in your rocks, just above my crosshair. Not sure if it's a displacement issue or just the lighting, but I figured I'd mention it.
This is up the left side of the building, immediately past the cart on stage 2. You can even see a checkpoint if you jump. Obviously it's just a small chunk, so a single wall coming off the back of the building would work fine.
My only other suggestion is one I've posted before and I'm not sure if you're planning to do it or not. During stage 2 you can start walking out of the attacker's spawn back toward stage 1. Obviously you have a player clip there, but it still feels unfinished. A small fence going across each side or even a "No Trespassing" sign in the ground on either side would really complete it IMHO.
A few questions/suggestions...
Is the sign going to have something on it? Right now it looks out of place.
There's a black gap in your rocks, just above my crosshair. Not sure if it's a displacement issue or just the lighting, but I figured I'd mention it.
This is up the left side of the building, immediately past the cart on stage 2. You can even see a checkpoint if you jump. Obviously it's just a small chunk, so a single wall coming off the back of the building would work fine.
My only other suggestion is one I've posted before and I'm not sure if you're planning to do it or not. During stage 2 you can start walking out of the attacker's spawn back toward stage 1. Obviously you have a player clip there, but it still feels unfinished. A small fence going across each side or even a "No Trespassing" sign in the ground on either side would really complete it IMHO.
Yeah somehow I managed to completely forget to add those fences in.
And that sign should have an arrow on it but it got lost when I made the brushes func_detail (it changes the brush numbering for some stupid reason which breaks overlays) and I didnt realise before I did a 3 hour compile...
And that sign should have an arrow on it but it got lost when I made the brushes func_detail (it changes the brush numbering for some stupid reason which breaks overlays) and I didnt realise before I did a 3 hour compile...
I agree, why is it so long?
TheDarkerSideofYourShadow
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Lies Youme! I can see your red dev textured wall in the bottom left of the last SS you posted!