I think those industrial windows dont fit with the metal walls. I dont like the brick, I prefer a contrast between uilding colour and nature colour- even in dustbowl, its lrgely concrete/dark wood.
The crucifix is odd, and possibly ill-advised, but eh, whatever.
I think the brick building could do with something on the roof. One of those vent props like on badwater B, maybe.
Dat Tyre
Otherwise, lookin' good.
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