WiP in WiP, post your screenshots!

[LeSwordfish]

I have a feeling
This thread is off-topic
back to the pics

 

[Sergis]

This-is-my-en-try (5)
In-to-Litt-le-Edge-'s-BATT-con-test (9)
It-is-named-Nip-pon (5)

The English Mobster
Can not count syllables right
Trololololol

arent the syllables counted by pronunciation, not spelling?

dis is my en-three
in-to litl-edgs batt con-test
it is namd nip-pon

575

 

[Fruity Snacks]

arent the syllables counted by pronunciation, not spelling?

dis is my en-three
in-to litl-edgs batt con-test
it is namd nip-pon

575

No, everyone else is correct. Littleedges syllable amount is 4, not 2.

 

[TheKieranator]

It may be based on pronounciation. How I wrote it is how I pronounced it. When I was at primary school (in USA, read elemantary), they taught us to count the number of times our jaw moved down in normal speech, and that that number was in fact the number of syllables.

Also, while I don't have any WIP shots at the moment, I shall sate LeSwordfish's desire for pics with one from my dropbox:

 

[Sergis]

, they taught us to count the number of times our jaw moved down in normal speech, and that that number was in fact the number of syllables.

hmm
i can make the whole haiku have 0 syllables that way

 

[lana]

Haikus use mora.
Moras are not syllables.
"BATT" is two.

 

[LeSwordfish]

Now i post pictures.
Maybe more pics now?
Lets get the fuck off the topic of haikus.

(EDIT: Oh yeah this replaces the deathpit)

 

[Tom Hoen]

Noooo, LeSwordfish was faster. And I wont do any haikus in english as I'm finnish. Also my BATT entry changed from swamp to some water station.

 

[grazr]

 

[LeSwordfish]

The wood under the track curve looks... huh? I know you have a justification for stuff... i just don't get it.

 

[lana]

MORE ROPES

 

[Bermuda Cake]

The wood under the track curve looks... huh? I know you have a justification for stuff... i just don't get it.

is it a BATT entry? Could be a workaround for not moving the track

 

[Shanghai]

more ropes

not enough. Go go go more ropes!

 

[grazr]

The wood under the track curve looks... huh? I know you have a justification for stuff... i just don't get it.

To be honest i wasn't sure what to put there. I couldn't simply put wooden beams as they had to be thin on the inside and wide on the outside due to the extent of the curve, which was just difficult to pull off when trying to make it look natural whilst also executing a platform for defenders. I tried checking out pl_upward for reference but the curve was 180* and realised plain old wooden beams as normal so i wasn't sure what do put in it's place.

If you have an alternative by all means suggest it. I havn't been able to execute a "corner" platform the same width as the track-bridge past it. Nothing that looks natural, anyway.

 

[Gerbil]

I hate haikus.

 

[TheKieranator]

Gerbil hates haikus
But he made a new rifle
Is it air powered?

 

[grazr]

Looks like a tranq gun.

 

[Huckle]

Looks like a tranq gun which is absolutely awesome, though I have a hard time seeing how to pull the bolt (?) back when the scope is attached to it.

Make the brown parts duct tape and add some wear and tear on the trigger and scope and it will be more awesome.

 

[EArkham]

I hate haikus.

This looks pretty great, but you lost me at the stock. It seems to be curved like a cane for the sake of curving like a cane.

I'd suggest giving it a more traditional stock with the cannister below it, then adding a metal hook (taped or bolted on) if you really want to give it that shape.

Ditto on what Huckle said; that bolt action doesn't look like it'd work.

 

[Turbo Lover]

Gerbil: Sniper now has 5 Rifle replacements.

Please, think of the children. Think of the Demoman.

Nerd: Looks flat as hell, with lots of long choke-y/sightline-y paths to the point, and no cover.