Scoville
- Thread starter Void
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- Apr 19, 2009
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Its very BLU, now how about some RED!
- Sep 28, 2009
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The only comment I have is that Stage 2 feels too divided. Try funneling the routes that go around the building a bit more inward. The building over the fans, for example, can be completely avoidable. Force players that wish to take that path into it in order to get around so that classes can deal some damage to them.
absurdistof
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- Aug 10, 2009
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Is that a custom texture behind the windows or am I hallucinating
Randdalf
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- Feb 14, 2008
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The top screenshot needs a little more ooph, it's like you just laid down the basic detailing but didn't bother with the rest, unlike in the other 2 screenshots which look great.
Put a few roof vents on the flat roofs in the 3rd shot, makes it a little more interesting.
Put a few roof vents on the flat roofs in the 3rd shot, makes it a little more interesting.
Hooray! It's kind of intimidating how you can do so much in the time it takes me to get a door working. But the sooner the map gets finished, the better.
I was planning on doing a final sweep on all the contest maps before the end of the contest. If you've seen what I've done in other detailed maps, I go through a map on my own and find any rocket jump exploits, playerclip fails, displacement fails, misaligned props, weird lighting, etc. and provide screenshots of it all.
I was planning on doing it as soon as a new version of your map was released, but now that I notice there are only 15 days left, I didn't want to find out that a map was updated, go through it, and then find out that since there are only x days left, a new version wouldn't be submitted to the contest, thus my work not as useful as it could be (that is, I'm implying that you will finish your map even after the contest).
So message me on Steam (my name is littleedge), find me in the chat (between 3 and 9 pm ET), pm me here, or reply in this thread if you want me to go through your map in the current version, or do it in your next version. Or if you don't want me to go through it at all, and anything i come upon in a Gameday is enough.
I was planning on doing it as soon as a new version of your map was released, but now that I notice there are only 15 days left, I didn't want to find out that a map was updated, go through it, and then find out that since there are only x days left, a new version wouldn't be submitted to the contest, thus my work not as useful as it could be (that is, I'm implying that you will finish your map even after the contest).
So message me on Steam (my name is littleedge), find me in the chat (between 3 and 9 pm ET), pm me here, or reply in this thread if you want me to go through your map in the current version, or do it in your next version. Or if you don't want me to go through it at all, and anything i come upon in a Gameday is enough.
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Stretched window texture is streched 
- Oct 19, 2008
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Dr. ROCKZO
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