CP Artpass RaVaGe

[RaVaGe]

Forgot this

 

[Jetti]

Where is this? I cannot tell.

 

[Draco18s]

Where is this? I cannot tell.

Neither can I.

 

[RaVaGe]

Inside this.

 

[TerabyteST]

Inside this.

You fucked everything up <__<

 

[The Political Gamer]

No, he is detailing and taking creative risk, the one thing that most maps in this contest severely lack.

 

[Draco18s]

No, he is detailing and taking creative risk, the one thing that most maps in this contest severely lack.

Hey now, I tried something.

 

[Swordz]

You fucked everything up <__<

That screenshot looks fine to me. I did that "mini-cliff" too

 

[RaVaGe]

That screenshot looks fine to me. I did that "mini-cliff" too

Lawl

 

[honeymustard]

You fucked everything up <__<

Nice.

 

[RaVaGe]

First test.

 

[TerabyteST]

Once again, you're changing a lot of the playable area.

 

[RaVaGe]

Please, don't speak, thx

 

[TerabyteST]

You'll tell me when you'll be disqualified

 

[TerabyteST]

I was not being an ass. I was stating the truth.

 

[RaVaGe]

Yes, but when the feedback is always even bullshit, this is totally useless

 

[re1wind]

Hawt. Ignore the "omg layout!" wingebags.

i recognize the area easily enough and i like what i see.

 

[tyler]

You can be an asshole and state the truth at the same time.

Ravage, I think this looks great.

 

[grazr]

Whilst i wont comment on the changes to gameplay, however minor or major some might consider them, there are a couple things that bug me about your aesthetics.

Progression and nuetrality. Your first building is nuetral industrial. This is hydro's theme because it is TC. Nuetral industrial has no place in maps other than TC. Which warrant team based industrial or cover operation guises. It's directly related to game mode mechanics.

Read this article: link and study A/D aesthetics.

A note on A/D Façades.

The theme is typically based off an important resource. Weapons, fuel, food, transport and communications are probably the main 5. Once chosen, you can begin to shape your aesthetics to meet the needs of replicating X type of facility.

When applying 3 stages it is easier to break up progression, whilst single stage A/D can be a little trickier in applying hints of progression to players. But it can be defined as such: sparse huts and out house storage sheds, into more solid structures that probably handle raw materials and equipment, then onto more developed and permanent structures (made out of metal and concrete as opposed to wood) that are likely used for refining or the later stages of resource X's life. Be it a firing mechanism for weapons, distillery for fuel, depot for food etc.

Your map currently displays no progression that allow players a sense of achieving their goals as they progress through the map. They start off in a nuetral industrial building move out into wooden ones and presumably back into RED industrial. This suggests push CP or TC gameplay, not A/D.

The quality of the aesthetics is fine, but use of industrial instead of wood is a common cop-out because it's so easy to make it look nice.

 

[ANova]

I didn't mean bad I love the map