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I think that aesthetically it's way too noisy. The little playable area is fine, but the fence, trains, power tower, gates, etc. all kinda blend together into a mess.
WiP in WiP, post your screenshots!
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Burnout6010
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... those props are only there waiting for me to make a bigger and longer skybox to put them in :S (ala Waste/Well)
So of course now they are waiting in that cube =/
What I wanted to show was the removal of the platform to the profit of what it looks like now. Before it lead you to the top of a train and I thought the brushwork looked bad and it displeased so I removed ... most of it D:
Bermuda Cake
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I think it looks fine. Bear in mind the player's never going to see that angle, they'll be at ground level. Although that's a point in favour of reducing the detail, seeing as the train blocks a lot of it.
Burnout6010
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Just started a mvm map 30 mins ago. The kickstarting idea was to have the robots walk out of a cave filled with water.
The robots are going to come from the water ? :O
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Burnout6010
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That's very pretty, but i think you should use those visually noisy stone and wood textures less. The eye is almost scattered across the picture, and that's without very many props. Ideally you want areas of visual noise to draw the eye to important places like control points.
Too less surf maps! Needs more!
Stage 1 //EDIT: The spawn is supposed to be a U.F.O, ok? :<
Stage 2
Hidden Stage (Without the ending becasue it's pretty poorly made atm)
Stage 1 //EDIT: The spawn is supposed to be a U.F.O, ok? :<
Stage 2
Hidden Stage (Without the ending becasue it's pretty poorly made atm)
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If I knew and/or cared about surf maps I would totally make one that actually looked like a TF2 map