I figure it's time for some c10 progress shots.
The broken wall and rock there seem out of place to me, judging by how the building right next to it is built why would that broken wall be there right next to that 45 degree angled edge? Also why would the rock be there? Places that have rocks dispersed through the map like that are never as Industrial as this in my mind, any map that I can think of that has rocks like that are mining or ramshackle building like Upward and Dustbowl. There are industrial maps that have huge rocks like gorge but they keep them separate but having them in the wild areas not butted against buildings, like in Gorge's A point valley. Builders wouldn't leave that huge rock there and build around it.
Anyway, I hope you (and everyone else who is detailing a map) understand that this isn't me having a go at you or saying this is terrible but picking at it with a critical eye so help it feel more real. Try asking yourself the kinda rhetorical questions I've asked here when working on your piece and I hope I haven't scared anyone off from posting their W.I.P. entries here.