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[soylent robot]

Hay hay, after a one month break, I came back to mapping.
Today's progress:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mCFCWxAbCEY
Change log:

• Fixed the clipping issues on the roofs (exception: the roof that has Medi/Ammo kit);
• Removed the tunnel that was built on the rails to the first capture point;
• Improved cliff displacement a bit;
• Added electrical wires (experimental details);
• Expanded the map (du'h).

Feedback would be welcome

thats pretty detailed for a very early alpha

 

[phi]

I actually like that, it looks pretty good but how will it play? We will see...
Also, that building in front of BLU spawn has really small doors, you should widen them so more than one person at a time can go through them.

 

[deadsource]

I actually like that, it looks pretty good but how will it play? We will see...
Also, that building in front of BLU spawn has really small doors, you should widen them so more than one person at a time can go through them.

M'kay, note taken

 

[colacan]

It has a large amount of detail for an alpha. I hope that gameplay will turn out to be good, because else you probably did it all for nothing. But it looks nice, it really does!

 

[LeSwordfish]

You dont need to post changelogs and stuff here: thats better in your map thread.

 

[Tarry H Sruman]

A isn't presentable at the moment, so here's some pictures of B.

 

[Fruity Snacks]

Maybe have that control room have an angled glass to give that wall a little bit of excitement?

 

[MangyCarface]

Lack of support is killing the aesthetic. Needs two cylindrical concrete columns coming down from the overhang, possibly route stairs in spiral around them

Imagine that much concrete hanging over anything

 

[Sergis]

http://vincemichael.files.wordpress.com/2011/06/prentice-1009bs.jpg

imagined

 

[Tarry H Sruman]

Maybe have that control room have an angled glass to give that wall a little bit of excitement?

I tried this and it looked worse.

 

[tyler]

I think it would look a lot better if you actually made the upper thing a simple curve rather than leave it as a corner of a septagon or whatever the hell it is

 

[soylent robot]

it's a very thick rim of concrete along the edge of the roof, maybe it wouldn't look so heavy if that bit was thinner

 

[Fruity Snacks]

I think it would look a lot better if you actually made the upper thing a simple curve rather than leave it as a corner of a septagon or whatever the hell it is

Pentagon, since it has 5 sides.

 

[tyler]

It was just a joke Frozen

 

[Fruity Snacks]

It was just a joke Frozen

Wasn't very funny, and I feel people should know at least up to 8 sided polygon shape names.

 

[Trotim]

a dodecahedron face

 

[LeSwordfish]

If we're talking SEGMENTS, its a segment of a regular octagon.

 

[Tarry H Sruman]

All three exposed sides are of different lengths.

 

[Penguin]

If we're talking SEGMENTS, its a segment of a regular octagon.

http://youtu.be/ETdRWL3rf6Q

 

[deadsource]

Today's progress: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RcCTalW367s&feature=youtu.be.
Change log:

• Expanded the doorways;
• Added new structures;
• Added some tiny detail to the blue spawn.

(I don't know if I should make a separate thread for my map. This could happen to be more of an experiment (for myself) than a map meant to be play.)