KotH trains end A7

cold...dark...sandvich.

  1. Twist.vmf

    Twist.vmf L7: Fancy Member

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    trains end - cold...dark...sandvich.

    1,2 going to get you 5,6 WHERE IS SANDVICH!!??

    cock,lock,and get ready to die!

    red and blu have to fight over a water canal in the cold

    this is A1 and it will change over time

    lay of the land:
    2 underwater tunnels
    2 towers
    4 hp packs
    4 ammo packs
     
  2. The Letter Before A

    The Letter Before A Cool Idiot

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    Ill downlod and test this when I get home
    Be back with cc!
     
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  3. ArskaWarrior

    ArskaWarrior L1: Registered

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    winter maps are my favourite so I tested out. map looks beatiful and will be good if you spend more time.

    I noticed many mistakes or unpleasant things

    1. bad clippings
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    as you can see... not clipped at top of the map. possible to jump out of map and kill everyone at outside
    2. kind of stuck spot
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    at red side behind mesh fence is enough room for player to fit. only :scout:, :soldier: , :pyro:, :demo: ,and :engie: is possible to get inside at theirself but everyone can't get out.
    3. ''holes''
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    these ''fences'' have small ''hole''. I just fell way more better if you fix this :)
    4. more bad clipping
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    this corner clipping is not made correctly. doesn't really change gameplay at any way but, fix it for me
    5. just terrible looking
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    this hazard tape looks terrible because you have elongate it too long. you could just use hazard texture at alpha. I feel like I take this too much at into small the details.
    6. more need of clipping
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    none of clippings at here. 100% needed. got stuck at few time.
    7.
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    first photo is from outside of spawn. 2 doors. from truck is hard to get out because no room. after these doors is road from inside of small house. house is only road out when not playing jumper class. need more roads.
     
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  4. ExtraCheesyPie

    ExtraCheesyPie L7: Fancy Member

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    Please change the description. The word "cringe" comes to mind
     
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    Last edited: Aug 12, 2016
  5. Twist.vmf

    Twist.vmf L7: Fancy Member

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    thanks for the feedback! oh and ExtraCheesyPie please be more specific, even as the creator i know this is bad but i can only get better if you tell me what is bad and what is good. :/
     
  6. ExtraCheesyPie

    ExtraCheesyPie L7: Fancy Member

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    I meant this.
     
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  7. Twist.vmf

    Twist.vmf L7: Fancy Member

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    XD is was half asleep when i wrote that no wonder its bad and to be honest i hadn't seen it till now!
     
  8. Twist.vmf

    Twist.vmf L7: Fancy Member

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  9. HolySnickerPuffs

    aa HolySnickerPuffs Bad at TF2, Loves Mapping For TF2

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    So I'll cock lock AND get ready to die? Wow, my two favorite things!
     
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  10. Twist.vmf

    Twist.vmf L7: Fancy Member

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    cool
     
  11. ExtraCheesyPie

    ExtraCheesyPie L7: Fancy Member

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    was it really necessary to post "cool" in reply to a comment made ages ago? At least try to be subtle with your bumps, post an update or something.
     
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  12. Twist.vmf

    Twist.vmf L7: Fancy Member

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    i would like to say thank you to all the people who participated in the test! all of your feedback is very useful and funny to watch :D
     
  13. Twist.vmf

    Twist.vmf L7: Fancy Member

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    +map clipping fixed
    +sight lines fixed
    +lighting fixed
    +spawns are now 100% safe...but this might change
    +you can't cap in the water
    +more cover

    thanks for the feedback! :D

    Read the rest of this update entry...
     
  14. JudgeJamesC

    JudgeJamesC The Man of Many Updates

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    Please remember to put a version increment in the filename of your map. (Example: koth_trains_end_a3) this helps so that there aren't two or more slightly different maps with the same name.
     
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  15. Twist.vmf

    Twist.vmf L7: Fancy Member

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    Twist.vmf L7: Fancy Member

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    Twist.vmf L7: Fancy Member

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    Twist.vmf L7: Fancy Member

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  19. Muddy

    Server Staff Muddy Muddy

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    Not sure if you should be going into beta right now. This map still has loads and loads and loads of issues, and everyone has been giving feedback pointing them out but it looks like you've not done anything about them, and it's really kind of frustrating to see that there's no progress being made as a result. The vague changelogs aren't helping either.
     
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  20. Twist.vmf

    Twist.vmf L7: Fancy Member

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    i'm going into beta so i can get this map out of my life and move on to better maps! hell this was mainly just so i could learn how to use water and particles and also to take note of what mappers like and don't like. to me the train has reached it's end and it's time to go to work on a proper map.