I've just taken a look at your map because it looks quite interesting from the screenshots. Some things I noticed:
- Really nice atmosphere and landscape architecture
- The tree models are from Half-Life, aren't they? You should be using the TF2 trees as they are more fitting with the art style. Try props_foliage/tree_pine_extrasmall, props_foliage/tree_pine_small, props_foliage/tree_pine_huge (boojum's prop library really helps with those)
- The rope textures look weird, better use the black one
- The wooden towers don't have ladders, how would someone get up there?
- You could replace some of the brushwork fences with props_coalmines/wood_fence models as they look better
- Having sword fighting in the soundscape is a nice idea but after a while it gets a bit annoying. Maybe restrict it to the final area only. Also there's thunder in it although the sky is clear
- The map needs a better name
Edit: Also got some errors in the console...
MDLCache: Failed load of .VTX data for props_foliage/tree_pine_huge_transparent.mdl
MDLCache: Failed load of .VTX data for props_foliage/tree_pine_small_transparent.mdl
MDLCache: Failed load of .VTX data for props_forest/cliff_wall_01_cm.mdl
MDLCache: Failed load of .VTX data for props_misc\gaming_icosahedron_01.mdl
A custom HDR cubemap "materials/models/cubemaps/pyroland_cube_hdr.hdr.vtf": cannot be found on disk.
This really should have a HDR version, trying a fall back to a non-HDR version.
"materials/models/cubemaps/pyroland_cube_hdr.vtf": can't be found on disk
A custom HDR cubemap "materials/models/player/shared/eye-reflection-cubemap-.hdr.vtf": cannot be found on disk.
This really should have a HDR version, trying a fall back to a non-HDR version.
"materials/models/props_foliage/pine_tree_large_transparent.vtf": can't be found on disk
"materials/models/props_misc/gaming_icosahedron_01.vtf": can't be found on disk
"materials/models/props_misc/gaming_icosahedron_01_normal.vtf": can't be found on disk
"materials/models/props_misc/gaming_icosahedron_02.vtf": can't be found on disk
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