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I like the steam, but put it down a little more. Now it looks like you can easily stand there and it doesn't seem as much of a deadly pit.
CP Gerbil (Art Pass)
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I like the steam, but put it down a little more. Now it looks like you can easily stand there and it doesn't seem as much of a deadly pit.
How does the area behind the barn look?
I looked out there when playing, and it seemed that it ends pretty abruptly in an ugly manner. This is a very small detail, but might still be a nice improvement if you can find the time. The log used as a ramp in the before area also slightly clipped, but this is a very minuscule detail.
I tried the drop box version, and there was no explosion at the end...
Did you remove it
?I also agree somewhat on that you could maybe add some more fog down there, but it does otherwise look very awesome. I love how all the smaller boilers and things builds up to the final big one.
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Sorry, I'm Swedish.
I mean that shack thing with a hole on top, the B building. The background behind it, if you go up to the fence you can see the ground on the other side end abruptly.
Darn >:I did remove the explosion, there isn't enough time for me to learn how to animate an explosion and make the particle effects needed for that
Keep "add explosion" on the list of things to maybe add if you can find the time then?
Or rather...if you can find the help...
You mean how the original point was one solid cube you could put stickies on?
I don't think he means the actual platform, but the pipe/pipes sticking out from the sides of the platform.
I agree with Gerbil.
The only issue with that pipe might be if people could jump back out of the pit.
last test version before the final compile woo!
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1835520/artpass_final/artpass_gerbil_rc1.rar
I'm still trying to figure out how to completely hide the roof that keeps flickering when you stand near blu spawn, but apart from that I think I'm done. Map's already on the server so we can test it later if you guys want.
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1835520/artpass_final/artpass_gerbil_rc1.rar
I'm still trying to figure out how to completely hide the roof that keeps flickering when you stand near blu spawn, but apart from that I think I'm done. Map's already on the server so we can test it later if you guys want.
Hey there a couple of things i saw in the test of the map which i thought i'd post, even if theres no time to change anything/recompile:
http://image.bayimg.com/hapfgaacf.jpg Shouldn't both the computer consoles and the mainframes(Which look wierd anyway being so high up off the ground anyway) be the same colour? some of them look brown/orange around the map e.g: http://image.bayimg.com/hapfhaacf.jpg
http://image.bayimg.com/hapfiaacf.jpg Also my setting for TF2 are pretty poor but this overlay in RED's spawn is a real blur, surely its never meant to look like that?
http://image.bayimg.com/hapfkaacf.jpg this barrier feels too low to instintively tell me thats a inaccessible area, use glass instead maybe?
http://image.bayimg.com/japfpaacf.jpg the room feels really empty, maybe add some detail to the wall to break it up a bit from being just 6 concrete walls
http://image.bayimg.com/kapfaaacf.jpg and here feels too big, its hard to say how you could add any large props without changing the dynamics of the room but feels like it need something in here to me.
Hope any of this will be helpful and Good Luck in the Contest
http://image.bayimg.com/hapfgaacf.jpg Shouldn't both the computer consoles and the mainframes(Which look wierd anyway being so high up off the ground anyway) be the same colour? some of them look brown/orange around the map e.g: http://image.bayimg.com/hapfhaacf.jpg
http://image.bayimg.com/hapfiaacf.jpg Also my setting for TF2 are pretty poor but this overlay in RED's spawn is a real blur, surely its never meant to look like that?
http://image.bayimg.com/hapfkaacf.jpg this barrier feels too low to instintively tell me thats a inaccessible area, use glass instead maybe?
http://image.bayimg.com/japfpaacf.jpg the room feels really empty, maybe add some detail to the wall to break it up a bit from being just 6 concrete walls
http://image.bayimg.com/kapfaaacf.jpg and here feels too big, its hard to say how you could add any large props without changing the dynamics of the room but feels like it need something in here to me.
Hope any of this will be helpful and Good Luck in the Contest
Just sent in my entry. I haven't managed to fix most of the visual stuff from yesterday's test. Sorry about that, out of time
I'd like to thank the following people/groups:
- Rexy Ritz, and Supersandvich for giving me the idea to make a custom skybox. that was the first thing I made for this entry.
- The swamp team for providing us with such excellent assets to work with.
- A Boojum Snark, Acegikmo and Ravidge for the awesome prefab packs. They helped me a lot.
- Mott, Ravidge(again!), Equinoxo and Boylee for helping me learn how to make custom props and stuff. Couldn't have done it without them.
- Everyone who helped me with the map. Could have been general feedback, ideas, support and other things. I'd like to thank beatz especially for the support. Seems like he always has something nice to say
FINALLY I'M DONE WITH THIS GODDAMN THING.
I'd like to thank the following people/groups:
- Rexy Ritz, and Supersandvich for giving me the idea to make a custom skybox. that was the first thing I made for this entry.
- The swamp team for providing us with such excellent assets to work with.
- A Boojum Snark, Acegikmo and Ravidge for the awesome prefab packs. They helped me a lot.
- Mott, Ravidge(again!), Equinoxo and Boylee for helping me learn how to make custom props and stuff. Couldn't have done it without them.
- Everyone who helped me with the map. Could have been general feedback, ideas, support and other things. I'd like to thank beatz especially for the support. Seems like he always has something nice to say
FINALLY I'M DONE WITH THIS GODDAMN THING.
Well good luck! I'm surprised that a lot of people are submitting unfinished maps -.-
Like the whole point was to FINISH it. But yeah, I like the lumberyard theme you got!
Like the whole point was to FINISH it. But yeah, I like the lumberyard theme you got!