Cloudburst

Gerbil

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Feb 6, 2009
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Awesome job on the map. It was very fun to play :)

Here are some nitpicks:
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I kept getting stuck on some invisible object. Might be an unsewn seam.
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Some of the walls feel a bit bland. Might want to spice them up a little with supports or brushwork windows.
 

Penguin

Clinically Diagnosed with Small Mapper's Syndrome
aa
May 21, 2009
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You, little lady, need a promo shot of the scout on his knees and weeping right around the bank of the frozen river, in sight of the rainbow.
 

Okrag

Wall Staples
aa
Jun 10, 2009
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You know that large metal pack next to the intel room. Kill it. Kill it dead.
 

Sel

Banned
Feb 18, 2009
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2,570
I just hosted the weirdest fucking pug on this map.

I'll have the source tv demo up later, I think you're going to want to take a look at this...
 

Icarus

aa
Sep 10, 2008
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1,210
Don't rely too much on it. BLU team was acting completely retarded. NOTHING was getting done.