72hr A Red Trail Goes Through The Snow (SHORT FANFIC) 2016-07-22

This is basicly a short story.You can call it a fanfic.

  1. Vilzzex (ActionDevVito)

    Vilzzex (ActionDevVito) L2: Junior Member

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    A Red Trail Goes Through The Snow (SHORT FANFIC) - This is basicly a short story.You can call it a fanfic.

    This is a short fanfic/story about a team of RBI agents going on a mission in the Antartic.I will try to make one/two more fanfics during the Jam too.

    Made for reading in microsoft word.
     
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    Good story! Just bear in mind that when writing, you should always include a space after every full stop, comma, and most other punctuation marks. Also be sure to capitalise every instance of "I".
     
  3. Vilzzex (ActionDevVito)

    Vilzzex (ActionDevVito) L2: Junior Member

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    Well,thanks.
    And just bear in mind English isn't my first language XD
    Aand i noticed the capitalise every instance of I,but i forgot about it when writing :p