WiP in WiP, post your screenshots!

[ForbiddenDonut]

I really like how the point in the third screenshot is coming out.

 

[Shanghai]

What's with the concrete strip above the fence on the left? It looks out of place.

 

[Fredrik]

Adding some textures.
EDIT: Changed the lighting too.

 

[The Asylum]

No doubt I'm not the only one interested in fooling around with this Mann vs Machine game mode.

No doubt I'm not the only one already making quick meaningless sketches of what can be done for it.

No doubt I'm the ONLY one wondering how to fit it into Melee Fort.

 

[Tarry H Sruman]

curvedwood.jpg

 

[Tarry H Sruman]

What's with the concrete strip above the fence on the left? It looks out of place.

I agree.

 

[Pocket]

wow all the worst reactions itt

In all seriousness the only Mountain Lab thing I hate in that screenshot is the photo-of-a-monitor texture slapped onto a computer bank. Nobody should be using those textures. Ever. As far as I'm concerned, they might as well be HL2 textures. If you want a custom computer bank with a screen in it, like the radar one but different and with your own texture, I'm sure there are people who'd gladly oblige.

 

[tyler]

i put more crap in here

If you want a custom computer bank with a screen in it, like the radar one but different and with your own texture, I'm sure there are people who'd gladly oblige.

If someone makes me custom computer walls, I will use probably them, especially if one of them is a less hacky version of what I'm using now

 

[colacan]

i put more crap in here

Doesn't look like crap.

 

[Ælement]

No doubt I'm not the only one interested in fooling around with this Mann vs Machine game mode.

No doubt I'm not the only one already making quick meaningless sketches of what can be done for it.

No doubt I'm the ONLY one wondering how to fit it into Melee Fort.

Who knows. Maybe you've developed the perfect MvM map over the past 3 years without knowing it!

 

[Aki]

[redacted]

 

[LeSwordfish]

I think you should get your own thread, and i think the ceiling texture in that spawnroom is hideous.

 

[MangyCarface]

Well there's a lot we could pick apart there, but most noticeable is the line of cars, all facing one direction, used as a boundary. Prop spam. Make something nice out of brushwork

 

[Aki]

I think you should get your own thread, and i think the ceiling texture in that spawnroom is hideous.

The map isn't functional yet. And exposed sheet metal in a warehouse going to be ugly.

Well there's a lot we could pick apart there, but most noticeable is the line of cars, all facing one direction, used as a boundary. Prop spam. Make something nice out of brushwork

I said I wasn't happy with it.

 

[Ælement]

The map isn't functional yet.

You can just set it to "Planning" in your thread. Then change it to "alpha", once it's playable.

 

[Fruity Snacks]

No, the best thing to do is to get a thread for you map in the Map Workshop. You can just set it to planning, and post your WiP shots there. You'll get more direct and clear feedback.

 

[LeSwordfish]

But hold on. Exposed sheet metal will be ugly sure. In reality. You dont need to worry about reality! Use a less noisy texture like the door texture or a corrugated metal texture! Because this is fiction! It's all not real!

 

[Aki]

Very well.

 

[soylent robot]

that ceiling texture looks like a hl2 texture.

unless its a new one from that tokyo map i havent seen yet

 

[GPuzzle]

Turbine remakes everywhere. Can someone make a Junction remake? Sounds like a cool idea.