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[Pocket]

With Duke Nukem Forever and Chinese Democracy already released, what else will we have left to make fun of for endless development cycles?

Postal III — no wait, that finally came out on Steam last weekend, dang. Man, it's been like an endless parade of hell freezing over this past year. Maybe the world really is ending this December, only it's playing out like the ending of a TV show where all the loose ends are getting tied up.

Oh wait, Black Mesa still isn't out yet. So that, I guess.

 

[Seba]

When is it gonna be good, Peng?

 

[Sel]

 

[Rexy]

I'm done! Comments and suggestions welcome.

 

[Fruity Snacks]

I don't get the wall. What is it made of?

And maybe the stairs should be a different color and/or show more ware and tear since they are... stairs...

 

[Sel]

It seems uneven with the decay. You have the floor covered in garbage, have half the wall falling apart, and then you have the bottom half of the wall and pipes looking nearly brand new. Also why is the concrete in the smaller massive crack yellow, isn't concrete usually white with the outside painted a different color?

That last bit is more of a petty gripe, but the inconsistency with the decay really seems wrong to me.

 

[Godslayer57]

Rexy those stairs need a bit more wear. If the wall if falling to bit surely the much weaker yet somehow such crispy stairs should be damaged?

 

[Sergis]

It seems uneven with the decay. You have the floor covered in garbage, have half the wall falling apart, and then you have the bottom half of the wall and pipes looking nearly brand new. Also why is the concrete in the smaller massive crack yellow, isn't concrete usually white with the outside painted a different color?

That last bit is more of a petty gripe, but the inconsistency with the decay really seems wrong to me.

it looks like its halfway renovated

 

[Fruity Snacks]

it looks like its halfway renovated

Doom, the "Glass Half Full" kinda guy.

 

[Micnax]

Just having a little shot at some fun Portal 2 chambers while the cogs in my head figure out when I should release Alpha 3 of my contest map.

 

[tyler]

need to do clipping, entities, lighting, pickups, etc

thinking of just using the name crusoe for this as well, any objections/recommendations?

 

[Fruity Snacks]

I can't tell for sure, but that is one hell of a sightline down the middle

 

[YM]

need to do clipping, entities, lighting, pickups, etc

thinking of just using the name crusoe for this as well, any objections/recommendations?

yeeeahh that screenshot makes it look like you're gunna have a hellishly hard time optimising that.

 

[tyler]

I can't tell for sure, but that is one hell of a sightline down the middle

Vertically? It shouldn't be too bad, there's 2 height levels from top to bottom and a ton of side paths up to the top.

 

[Sel]

 

[Shanghai]

Sel, that keystone looks a bit off. I would go with either a diamond-shaped one or whatever shape this is.

 

[Fruity Snacks]

It's also kinda obvious that you just copied over the foundations. At least mirror them

 

[grazr]

Sel, that keystone looks a bit off. I would go with either a diamond-shaped one or whatever shape this is.

Er, isn't his keystone exactly the same shape as the second image you've linked there. But yes, i agree that the key stone could use more focus and be more of a feature.

 

[LeSwordfish]

The whole thing is just mirrored. Look at the reflections on the third stone down.

I think some of the blocks in the foundation stick out loads. Like the two that jut out on the left, ad the big one.

 

[Penguin]

Er, isn't his keystone exactly the same shape as the second image you've linked there. But yes, i agree that the key stone could use more focus and be more of a feature.

No, his is one stone that is oddly shaped, whereas the second image is two stones. He just needs to slice his current one in half.