WiP in WiP, post your screenshots!

[cyked]

Swordfish, your map looks like it has ground, walls, and shittons of props spammed everywhere. More props does not a pretty map make.

DID SOMEONE SAY PROPS?

 

[Dragonstorm24]

@Cyked I love prop hunt

 

[LeSwordfish]

Swordfish, your map looks like it has ground, walls, and shittons of props spammed everywhere. More props does not a pretty map make.

Thanks. Detailing is my real weak point, so thats what i need the feedback on right now.

Now either i could do the not-fun difficult detailing part again, or i could go "sod it" and do dev stuff. I pick option B.

 

[EArkham]

Nah, you don't need to re-detail from scratch or anything. Just start by removing the unnecessary stuff.

First screenshot, for example: Remove everything on the table, the table, the benches, the set of lockers behind the pushcart. Much more manageable amount of props.

(Oh, and maybe add a floor, even if it's just some basic wood -- having resupply props on dirt there looks a bit strange but that might be due to the cropping of the screenshot)

Okay, second screenshot may require some re-detailing. It's strange to have the tracks cross over a traincar.

Third screenshot, remove the large white vertical pipe, the pipes in the small building, the carts on the side track, the concrete barricade in the bottom right corner and top left corner, and adjust those rocks to serve the same purpose.

Kep

 

[RaVaGe]

I try a new theme

Thx Void !

 

[Ginger]

(Pic)
I try a new theme

Thx Void !

Ravage, go and get shitty at making maps ¬¬

 

[Gerbil]

Never would have thought about blending metal with grass. Interesting! :O

MEANWHILE IN GERBIL'S ARTPASS

 

[Arhurt]

If you never finish this i would love to.And if i did i would say you made it in the credits.

Hey!

Feel free to take hold of the concept/layout. I can even send you my VMTs if you want

 

[Goombac]

Thanks. Detailing is my real weak point, so thats what i need the feedback on right now.

Now either i could do the not-fun difficult detailing part again, or i could go "sod it" and do dev stuff. I pick option B.

Checked this tutorial out?

 

[Seba]

Hey!

Feel free to take hold of the concept/layout. I can even send you my VMTs if you want

I assume you mean .vmf's?

 

[Leminnes]

Making storm clouds for my map. They're going to randomly light up with lightning.

Cloud in question:

 

[Acumen]

gooba needs to paint these screens and it's done.
I based the colors heavily on the computer consoles, so no visible paint strokes and stuff
very simple

 

[Fredrik]

gooba needs to paint these screens and it's done.
I based the colors heavily on the computer consoles, so no visible paint strokes and stuff
very simple

Those looks great!
you're going to make a blue one too, right?

 

[Godslayer57]

I decided , due to a like of the look of Japanese shrines. i decided to make a map based around a shrine!

Those roofs aren't easy

 

[Goombac]

Damn, Godslayer I'd say that looks pretty good.

 

[tyler]

Yeah, wow. Wow.

That computer console is awesome too. I missed that somehow. Daaaang.

 

[EArkham]

I decided , due to a like of the look of Japanese shrines. i decided to make a map based around a shrine!

Those roofs aren't easy

Ah hah, so that's what the larger lanterns were for. Nice work!

Kep

 

[Seba]

I can't wait to jump up those stairs /sarcasm

 

[Penguin]

 

[Godslayer57]

You are a pirate!? Now all you need is a sail