CP Train Chain a5

[Truckojr]

Train Chain - This is my first map I've uploaded. Please leave advice.

This is my first map I've uploaded. Please play and leave advice.
This map takes place at the shore of a jungle, in a warehouse of trains. Whichever team takes control of the warehouse will take control of the other teams train line, which leads to their home base.
Note that this map is barley done and will be updated later to include more details and gameplay improvements (at least when people will start giving me advice.)]

 

[n8five484]

You have anymore screenshots?

 

[Truckojr]

The screenshots progress from blu's side to reds side

 

[seanji]

Your connecting areas ( specifically around Last and Second ) are essentially tunnels. Long, static tunnels that open up huge sightlines. These will slow down gameplay heavily, turning what could have been a challenge of teamwork into a question of ' who will be the first to get tired of spamming '

Your Mid's trigger_capture_area is also far too small. Generally, the higher the capture time, the larger the capture_area should be, to accommodate some movement during that long wait.

 

[Truckojr]

Thanks!

 

[Truckojr]

+added a wall in the rooms connecting 2nd to final point
+added other rooms off to the sides connecting 2nd to final point
+remolded center point building

(note: pictures are not updated)

Also, should I keep the building for center point or get rid of it and replace it with an open area.

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[n8five484]

Looks like you uploaded the vmf file instead of the bsp.

 

[Truckojr]

oops

 

[Truckojr]

+put right BSP file in

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[Truckojr]

+added respawn room trigger to all spawnrooms

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[Truckojr]

+made some hallways bigger (connecting 2nd point to final)
+Added textures to floors outside

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