Hi Jazz, we tested your map on our 24 person playtest on tf2newbs.co (as requested). I compiled a list of comments that I heard:
-looks like pipeline, feels like pipeline
-stage 2 seems longer
-sniper got in red spawn
-stage 3 was the least favorite
-i personally liked stages 1-2, but some others didnt because they don't like pipeline all that much
-liked the water escape hole under the beginning point