artpass_terabytest

[TerabyteST]

Shot from the interior (pretty rough)

 

[TerabyteST]

Exterior:

 

[KarmaPolice]

I think you should streamline/simplify that a bit, it just looks like a bunch pointless jumble of roofs.

 

[God of Rock]

That is so god-like. I need to go get in Hammer and work on my map.

 

[TerabyteST]

That is so god-like. I need to go get in Hammer and work on my map.

Said by God of Rock it is an honor

 

[TerabyteST]

I think you should streamline/simplify that a bit, it just looks like a bunch pointless jumble of roofs.

Why so? What would you suggest to change?

 

[Draco18s]

Critique

Note: upper left note about room was done before floor and ceiling height lines, but it still applies in general.

 

[TerabyteST]

Critique

Note: upper left note about room was done before floor and ceiling height lines.

Thanks for that! Gonna see what I can do about those issues

 

[Draco18s]

Sure thing.
I guess those architecture classes back in highschool really paid off.
(My brushwork is pretty good, even if my game design sense and my ability to detail or optimize aren't so great).

 

[TerabyteST]

I made a bit of the interiors too, but the lighting is too dark it's not worth screens.

 

[Draco18s]

But you haven't fixed the worst of the issue with the building in that there are some areas which have no logical interior space, especially that area on the left above the door: its probably tall enough to contain a room, but the ceiling and floor wouldn't line up vertically with the room you put windows on.

 

[lana]

Dormers don't necessarily have enough logical space either, but they are a key architectural component. The illogical areas can be storage or staircases.

 

[Draco18s]

Dormers don't necessarily have enough logical space either, but they are a key architectural component. The illogical areas can be storage or staircases.

True, but it entirely depends on the interior space. The building as-is has more dormer sections than rooms.

 

[TerabyteST]

New pics. I've changed the spawn texture.
Have a look at the interior. Does it look too large?

 

[God of Rock]

Man, that is some sexy detailing.

 

[TerabyteST]

Thanks

 

[TerabyteST]

Here's the BLU spawn, I think it's almost finalised (my only doubts are with the lighting)

C&C?

 

[Acumen]

wasn't it mentioned before that the woodwork clashes with the metal ? or was that another map project. don't remember :/
yeh well, i don't know if i just need to get used to it...i mean, you could nail those metal parts on the woodenframe theoretically, but if it makes sense, i don't know :/

 

[tyler]

Seems fine to me? That's a real way you can build things, at least.

 

[owly-oop]

that support spam is ridiculous