artpass_spud

[Mr. Happy]

agree, bright red ftw

 

[Tinker]

I'd make the tractor a little less red, this way it doesn't look like it's used at all, more like a toy.

 

[Randdalf]

B looks kinda dark inside the control point...

 

[jpr]

I like this.
It looks good witout being overly complex, and is simple without looking bland.

 

[Dr. Spud]

Yes I'm going to finish. Might be close to the wire though...

Here's a picture to keep you happy. I thought it was clever:

 

[Verno]

What the hell kind of wine are they making? A gift for BLU perhaps.

 

[Simski]

I honestly think the brightness of it is fine. It might be contrasting, but it works. It fits perfectly right there.

I disagree, I think it would look better if it was the same or at least a more similar color to the car in the background of the same picture.

The one next to the brown building.

I just really don't like that bright red color.
It looks too neat, and it also look a bit too girly.

 

[coagulated]

Yeah I don't disagree, the tractor looks really, really, really freakin nice in that pic. But the issue isn't about whether or not it looks good, it's about whether it will draw too much attention to it. Spud, I think that you should tone it down or at the very least do a few comparisons to see what works best. If you still have time for that, anyways.

Edit: Oh wait that's what you're doing, nevermind

Edit 2: Is the death pit full of radioactive wine yet?

 

[owly-oop]

this is my favorite entry so far 9.7256 out of 10 i can use decimals my math teacher taught me

 

[Dr. Spud]

Hey, it's done! You can download it!

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3479091/artpass_spud.zip

And now prepare for a torrent of screenshots (linked to avoid destroying this page):

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3479091/artpass/artpass_spud-final1.jpg
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3479091/artpass/artpass_spud-final2.jpg
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3479091/artpass/artpass_spud-final3.jpg
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3479091/artpass/artpass_spud-final4.jpg
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3479091/artpass/artpass_spud-final5.jpg
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3479091/artpass/artpass_spud-final6.jpg
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3479091/artpass/artpass_spud-final7.jpg
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3479091/artpass/artpass_spud-final8.jpg
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3479091/artpass/artpass_spud-final9.jpg
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3479091/artpass/artpass_spud-final10.jpg
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3479091/artpass/artpass_spud-final11.jpg
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3479091/artpass/artpass_spud-final12.jpg
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3479091/artpass/artpass_spud-final13.jpg

In case you're lazy here's a highlight reel:

 

[Wilson]

What is up with your images?

 

[Lord Ned]

Dunno if any of these have been spotted, just did a quick run through:

(Crack in the displacement)

 

[Dr. Spud]

Dunno if any of these have been spotted, just did a quick run through: (Crack in the displacement)

That's actually not a crack, it's where the dirt meets the concrete in that tunnel. In hindsight I probably should have recolored the concrete.

 

[Lord Ned]

I'd just make the tunnel concrete, it looks like a crack and the water isn't helping. :/


Also I applaud you for a brush-based tilted broken water-wheel.

Edit: Nevermind, it's not on grid.

 

[Acumen]

While i was huge sucker for all of your maps so far, this one just impressed me a lot more. it has such a paintery feel to it, that i just fell in love with. the colors are so vibrant and everything just kinda floats together

like this scene here:
http://forums.tf2maps.net/geek/gars/images/3/6/4/8/artpass_spud-final1.jpg
mighty awesome work !

 

[Penguin]

the pic matt posted is just about my only complaint.

 

[Mr. Happy]

It's pretty cool but a complete failure since it promises to be a winery and you can see no grapes, no wine bottles, no cheese,....

 

[LeSwordfish]

you know that guy who said computer games could never be art? fuck him, this qualifies.

 

[lana]

It's pretty cool but a complete failure since it promises to be a winery and you can see no grapes, no wine bottles, no cheese,....

You're a whinery.

 

[LeSwordfish]

it has barrels. it has vines. it has wine. its a vineyard not a winery, and cheese?