Time For Poetry

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  1. Terwonick

    Terwonick L6: Sharp Member

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    that's right, it's time for poetry. please post only original works, original meaning that you wrote it.

    here I go

    "Endless Chasing"
    by Terwonick

    I feel like I'm just chasing cars
    Never stopping never resting
    Cause I felt like I was caring
    And now you drive away in those cars

    When you remember me
    Don't forget the times we laughed
    The last time we felt that draft
    Was the last time you talked to me

    With each passing moment I feel
    Your presence slipping away
    And with each ending day
    I hope to strike a deal

    To keep you here with me
    And end the endless chasing
    Of this restless car following
    If only you would talk to me
     
  2. Okrag

    aa Okrag Wall Staples

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    Are you a dog?
     
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  3. Terwonick

    Terwonick L6: Sharp Member

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    when you put it that way... (no)
     
  4. Terwonick

    Terwonick L6: Sharp Member

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    ‎"My Box of Care"
    - Terwonick

    You are my Pandora's Box
    Protected like Fort Knox
    Your personality really rocks
    You make me feel like Brock's

    Irrational falling for Nurse Joy
    Cause when you feel joy,
    I feel less like a boy,

    And when you hurt with a frown,
    I stop being such a stupid clown

    In a way I hope shows I still care.
     
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  5. Sel

    Sel Banned

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    can you narrate these for us too

    theyre so good
     
  6. Terwonick

    Terwonick L6: Sharp Member

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    I'm not sure if your being sarcastic...

    and what do you mean by "narrate" ???
     
  7. Urban

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    Dog

    You’re my dog I love you so
    Even when you’re wet with snow
    I miss you when you are not near
    I love it when you lick my ear
    I love that you are soft to the touch
    Some say I love you too much
    You have a black wet nose
    Wetter than a rivers flow
    I think about you everyday
    To live without you there is no way
    I hope that you can live forever
    So we can be together whenever
    I love it when you want to play
    That is something I could do all day
    You love when I give you human food
    Even though it’s a little rude
    You also chase cars
     
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  8. Verumae

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    listen up, son, this here is called freeverse

    "Challenges" by El Verumae

    I'm so good at everything

    the end
     
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  9. Terwonick

    Terwonick L6: Sharp Member

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    I never knew that "nose" rhymes with "flow"

    other than that, I think it's pretty good.
     
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    'twas my first time.
     
  11. Sergis

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    ima rhyme like a dime like im a poetic mastermind ima work the words like ive got hands of a mime i am really committing a crime posting this rhyme its a crime like the paint colored lime its a crime against common sense, against mind why why the hell am i doing this, this aint me, this a lie, oh my
     
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  12. Prestige

    aa Prestige im not gay anymore

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    My partners out there but we ain't together still,
    So I better build with someone 'cause I doubt that we ever will.
    And if I never feel love at least I'll never cry,
    If only fools fall guess I'm a pretty clever guy.
    For never trying and just voluntarily staying solitaire,
    'Cause in all sincerity who wants to marry me?
    I'm callous and cold and I've grown distant,
    Cause most sisters only talk to me when their man wont listen.
     
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  13. Terwonick

    Terwonick L6: Sharp Member

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    aa tyler snail prince, master of a ruined tower

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  15. Prestige

    aa Prestige im not gay anymore

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    You make me feel like Brock's
    Irrational falling for Nurse Joy
    Cause when you feel joy,
    I feel less like a boy,

    You make me feel like Brock's
    Irrational falling for Nurse Joy
    Cause when you feel joy,
    I feel less like a boy,

    You make me feel like Brock's
    Irrational falling for Nurse Joy
    Cause when you feel joy,
    I feel less like a boy,

    You make me feel like Brock's
    Irrational falling for Nurse Joy
    Cause when you feel joy,
    I feel less like a boy,

    You make me feel like Brock's
    Irrational falling for Nurse Joy
    Cause when you feel joy,
    I feel less like a boy,
     
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  16. Terwonick

    Terwonick L6: Sharp Member

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    yyler, I love you, thank you!!!

    I was so touched, I basically broke down in tears, I needed that, again, thank you!
     
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  17. Verumae

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    that was beautiful
    especially the brock part
     
  18. Fr0Z3nR

    aa Fr0Z3nR Creator of blackholes & memes. Destroyer of forums

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