StormDrain

[Gerbil]

Looks much better! Can't wait to try this

 

[fubarFX]

any post-gameday thoughts? no? aww.. it's no big deal, I had enough in-game feedback to get me going

 

[Tapp]

Something I noticed in the second screenshot, something which really gets on my nerves, is that hanging platform. While the platform itself is fine, you need to remember that the model is designed to be supported by surrounding structure. The ropes have no tension on them, and it looks really unnatural to have bent ropes. Of course, this is easy to fix, just remove the platform and remake your own with some entity ropes. Of course that's just my little rant, I'll be back with some real feedback once I've run through the map.

 

[fubarFX]

alright I'l keep that in mind

 

[Tapp]

And as I crash your browser with excessive images...

See the requirements section

Sorry if I just took up a page, but that's my opinions of your map. Great work!

 

[fubarFX]

woah thanks tapp.
but yeah... about the water requirements, I'm not sure what's happening here as I met all of them and it renders fine for me :\
I'll have a look into that.

and yeah, from your screens, I can tell I forgot to pak my particle system *facepalm*
but yeah, I was planing adding more

 

[fubarFX]

alright, after playtesting alpha 4 today I decided to abandon this map as I realised I wont be able to achieve what I want with this map. I figured it'd be easier for me to start again from scratch.
so, the map goes to garbage but the style however, does not. my next map will have a similar setting and hopefully, a better layout.

I see where this map has failed and hopefully that'll help me out in my future attempts

 

[StickZer0]

Hopefully you learn a lot from it - ie, don't build spots above a spawn room that the enemy can set up sentries etc on

Was a fun map, I loved the idea, maybe you'll revisit the sewer theme sometime?

 

[Terr]

I get a Mirror's Edge vibe.