Map concept Thread

[radarhead]

aight I think this relates to this thread

Heres a sketch i made for my map cp_oblako. It plays terribly, can anyone explain why? Please halp I'm hopeless

https://tf2maps.net/downloads/oblako.3924/

Have you gotten a proper test for it yet? It doesn't look half bad in the screenshots.

 

[Nixon]

Have you gotten a proper test for it yet? It doesn't look half bad in the screenshots.

https://feedback.tf2maps.net/map/cp_oblako_a3/
Most recent play test.

Here's the most recent layout.
Thanks for the help!!