Rhamkin updated Logstershore with a new update entry:
THE BETA STAGE
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THE BETA STAGE
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- Thread starter Rhamkin
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Fiddleford
L2: Junior Member
- Feb 21, 2020
- 89
- 58
feedback as per request
-How did these tires get on that pole?
-Looks like I can get up here, but I can't
-tree sticking through wall
-displacement sticks through other displacement
-the lighting in this buildings is too close to the prop and/or not wide enough so you get the odd shadows. Also seems odd to have such a harsh light in a room open to the outside, maybe keep the bulb there but have it turned off and use a light with with the same settings as environmental light or something.
-Pine trees don't drop their leaves, let alone ones that look like this
-that fence/railing is so short for a large space it's odd that I can't jump over it
-light streaks don't line up at all. Use some brushes with white gradient and render effects to make ones that actually fit the roof
-make func_illusionary
-doesn't show in a screenshot but this guy is constantly vibrating and restarting his animation
-illumination on the door window doesn't make sense with the area behind it
-this door is impossible as it leads to this outside area
-No way for any of this stuff to have gotten up here
far hill is very stretched, also remove shadows from the rocks
-remove collision or clip smooth
-no draw
-so many stairs are unclipped
-this hill has the same problems as the previous. Take a look at Yukon for an example of hills like this
-this ceiling is super messed up with props sticking in it
-upper area looks accessible yet it's not
-I can get under here
-clip all of this beamwork. Also maybe put a door into the building
-sign is basically unreadable on this texture
-crane isn't far enough away to get away with being basic brushwork
-keep getting caught up on these consoles when trying to walk through here
-the highly reflective metal texture here doesn't fit
-up texture scale for water
-floating mushrooms
-z-fighting on the windows. Also the roof looks accessible and yet it's not
-maybe have this middle panel see-through to make this area more interesting and let players see where all they can go
-clip the beamwork
Lastly, your respawnroom visualizers are messed up and I can't leave my own spawn.
-How did these tires get on that pole?
-Looks like I can get up here, but I can't
-tree sticking through wall
-displacement sticks through other displacement
-the lighting in this buildings is too close to the prop and/or not wide enough so you get the odd shadows. Also seems odd to have such a harsh light in a room open to the outside, maybe keep the bulb there but have it turned off and use a light with with the same settings as environmental light or something.
-Pine trees don't drop their leaves, let alone ones that look like this
-that fence/railing is so short for a large space it's odd that I can't jump over it
-light streaks don't line up at all. Use some brushes with white gradient and render effects to make ones that actually fit the roof
-make func_illusionary
-doesn't show in a screenshot but this guy is constantly vibrating and restarting his animation
-illumination on the door window doesn't make sense with the area behind it
-this door is impossible as it leads to this outside area
-No way for any of this stuff to have gotten up here
far hill is very stretched, also remove shadows from the rocks
-remove collision or clip smooth
-no draw
-so many stairs are unclipped
-this hill has the same problems as the previous. Take a look at Yukon for an example of hills like this
-this ceiling is super messed up with props sticking in it
-upper area looks accessible yet it's not
-I can get under here
-clip all of this beamwork. Also maybe put a door into the building
-sign is basically unreadable on this texture
-crane isn't far enough away to get away with being basic brushwork
-keep getting caught up on these consoles when trying to walk through here
-the highly reflective metal texture here doesn't fit
-up texture scale for water
-floating mushrooms
-z-fighting on the windows. Also the roof looks accessible and yet it's not
-maybe have this middle panel see-through to make this area more interesting and let players see where all they can go
-clip the beamwork
Lastly, your respawnroom visualizers are messed up and I can't leave my own spawn.
Fiddleford
L2: Junior Member
- Feb 21, 2020
- 89
- 58
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ya know, I looked through google to try n find an image like this and found nothing.... Closest I got where tires that where cut.