72hr "After War" a Cinematic SFM Picture 2017-02-13

A cinematic poster of Soldier smoking

  1. Zeklyn

    Zeklyn L2: Junior Member

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    "After War" a Cinematic SFM Picture - A cinematic poster of Soldier smoking

    I tried to aim at getting a cinematic feeling.

    No custom content used, absolutely nothing

    Had to reupload cause i forgot to put it in the 72hr section thingy, my bad. Not sure though but I reuploaded it to make sure.

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    Last edited: Feb 13, 2017
  2. LeSwordfish

    aa LeSwordfish semi-trained quasi-professional

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    It's very impressive. I think maybe making it the slightest bit brighter might help it a little - i appreciate how cinematic the darkness makes it, though.
     
  3. Zeklyn

    Zeklyn L2: Junior Member

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    Thanks for the feedback! I had some problem with the light, it was hard to make it look dark but bright enough. I had around 5 different versions with different "levels" of light after i experimented I ended up with this version
     
  4. theatreTECHIE

    aa theatreTECHIE Yet another Techie for the net...

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    Maybe you could have the end of the cigar glow red, and have that emit a small red glow on the scene.
     
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  5. Zeklyn

    Zeklyn L2: Junior Member

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    Its originally glowing red, but lowering the camera brightness makes it extremely dark sadly.

    I'll think about it next time, and maybe use photoshop to make the glowing effect