Red is supplying water to the people of the valley, and Blu are a bag of jerks.
Skidoo - Red is supplying water to the people of the valley, and Blu are a bag of jerks.
This map seems very, very detailed for A1. Also some other screen shots would be nice.
That description is gold I'll dl and have a run around at some point
e: Ran around a bit (on my own, so feel free to ignore any/all of this) and I think overall it has potential, but at the moment lacks flow and some parts feel overscaled.
One sightline across both spawn doors.
At first, I was a bit confused because you have to make a 90 degree turn the moment you leave spawn, as Blu (and can make a 180 degree turn), so I would suggest putting Blu's spawn under where those water towers are now, with maybe another door where the crates on the left are (above the healthbar)
Massive sightline and overscaling here (to be honest, this could probably work if you split this up into two or three rooms)
Of the two routes to get onto last, one requires Blu to spawncamp Red, and the routes leading round to the other feel much more like a flank
Sightline (if possible, I would suggest moving both doors to the left and that hole to the right, to try to break it up)
This area feels massively overscaled, and the stairs automatically draw the player's eye, whereas the easier route to last is the one hidden away on the left
I like the concept behind this attic up here, but it's dark and feels quite cramped and confusing. Try opening it up into one room with balconies leading off to the roofs.
Also, clip this, this, this, and this
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