72hr [SFM] One hell of a fight 2017-02-11

Its a PNG image of demoman fighting The HHH thats made in SFM By Me

  1. Zero The Serious Pyro

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    One hell of a fight - Its a PNG image of demoman fighting The HHH thats made in SFM

    The poster toke me 2 hours to make in SFM while im sick so hopefully this should do for the entry. the hard part is trying to figure out which maps or places in TF2 would fit the scenery you are making but im glad that i've found a good spot.
     
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  2. Egan

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    Looks cool! Lighting looks good.

    I wonder if you could make HHH seem scarier - maybe fiery like he's stronger in hell.

    Maybe show demoman a bit stronger and customized - maybe put a shield on him and some sort of lore-related cosmetic. Maybe even the eyelander mark on his eye like that's how he's got a shot against the HHH.

    Maybe a bit more dramatic camera placement so we don't just have both characters smack-dab in the middle of the frame and a bunch of space on the right under the sword.
     
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  3. Zero The Serious Pyro

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    I appreciate your feedback and your advice for the improvement.

    Yeah i did thought of adding the shield but i sadly forgot about it and the reason i didn't gave the demoman cosmetic is because i was trying to go
    for the normal vanilla demoman like in the official tf2 comics or other than that.
    Also fiery HHH does sound interesting i do admit.

    I was in a rush and i know i shouldn't rush art but my sickness gave me downsides of having the right mindset of thinking, but other than that
    thanks again friend i will acknowledge your advice :)
     
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    Last edited: Feb 16, 2017