CTF Hush

Discussion in 'Map Factory' started by Boccow, Sep 22, 2014.

  1. Boccow

    Boccow L1: Registered

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    CTF_Hush is set in a Mann.co warehouses complex at the first lights of the morning.

    The bases are positioned on two hills, facing each one. To reach the top you have to advancing through the warehouses, ideal for brutal close combat.

    I'm Hungry for Feedbacks!
     
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  2. HQDefault

    aa HQDefault ...what

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    I can tell just from your layout image that this is probably WAY to complicated
     
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  3. puxorb

    aa puxorb L69: Emoticon

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    I did a bit of testing with bots for overall size and trying to learn routes and such. This map looks very promising and was super fun to play on. Anyway, have some feedback:

    The center of this map is its strongest; its incredibly diverse and offers many routes and interesting geometry. Overall I think it is good for all classes, even engineers with the side-yards with the shipping containers. One complaint though: this one is self explanatory. Can you guess which team this heavy is on? Get some light entities in here.
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    Just a personal thing. I hate paper thin walkways, but if you can justify it in detailing, by all means go ahead. But for now try to make them at least 4 units thick.
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    I noticed that you like to use this stair model a lot.
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    You have already proven that you can do better! Make the other ones out of brush. (Remember to func_detail them and put a triangle playerclip inside.)
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    And lastly I think this area can benefit from being simplified. There are a lot of small doors right next to each other, which can be replaced by fewer, larger doors. (I'm mostly talking about the area on the right of the screenshot.)
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    Altogether I think this is a wonderful first map. It should be fun to test.
     
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  4. Moonrat

    aa Moonrat The end of an era

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    This looks like an extremely good map, I wonder how people will fair on it though.....
     
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  5. Boccow

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    Thanks for the feedbacks guys! i'm happy to see the map is fun to play because it was my biggest fear to create something boring!

    Map and screenshots updated!

    Next days i'm going to start texturing and make a better lighting. Thanks again guys! :)
     
  6. Dain

    Dain L3: Member

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    You should put it on some gamedays and imps so you can get more layout feedback before you even think of large-scale detailing. It's almost unheard of for a map to have a decently fun layout after just a few updates.

    Not saying it isn't fun right now, but it can always be better :)
     
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  7. Boccow

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    Map Updated to A3. I Rebuild the Intel zone and main base because were small areas and was very hard for attackers to capture the enemy intel. I realized that there was still much work to do before the map had a solid foundation. For Now i'm going to edit after some gamedays to get a better idea of which way this map needs to take.