Greyscale

KotH Greyscale A2

Wyvern

Certified TF2 Cartographer
Feb 16, 2018
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Greyscale - Extremely simple KOTH map with 2Fort influences.

Hi everyone!

This is my first large project, so constructive feedback is greatly appreciated! I'm posting this on the discord, so feel free to test it there.

-Wyvern
 

YOYOYO

41 crashes and counting
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Jul 10, 2017
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So, this isn't bad for a first map!
But some little tips i wanna point out:
koth_greyscale0000.jpg

Many places, especially here, are quite over scaled. You can fix this by either making the geometry smaller, or adding certain things. Like buildings or more geometry. (In my opinion, adding is easier.)
Another thing, the pickups are placed in strange places, with not much of a reason.
You don't have many pickups, which could be a problem, but then you have one or two very powerful ones ones as seen here and the picture up there ^
koth_greyscale0001.jpg
 

Wyvern

Certified TF2 Cartographer
Feb 16, 2018
105
152
Wow! I didn't expect to get a response this quickly! Nonetheless, duly noted!