Crazy Pete's Bog

[The Political Gamer]

First off, the name really worries me because of the lack of any a,b,rc, etc. This means that if a server has one version and the player has another but they are both named the same. The player would get removed from the server. At the very least name the next version pl_crazy_petes_bog_v1 or something.

Alright on to the map!

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/1276735/Pictures/Maps/hl2 2010-04-24 19-32-29-33.jpg
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/1276735/Pictures/Maps/hl2 2010-04-24 19-31-15-13.jpg
Both of these places are really dark.

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/1276735/Pictures/Maps/hl2 2010-04-24 19-25-54-61.jpg
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/1276735/Pictures/Maps/hl2 2010-04-24 19-25-58-29.jpg
I got stuck in the displacement when I was on top of the cart.

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/1276735/Pictures/Maps/hl2 2010-04-24 19-30-13-95.jpg
Um I don't quite know whats going on here.

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/1276735/Pictures/Maps/hl2 2010-04-24 19-30-45-95.jpg
BLU's first spawn is a camper's dream come true. They are not only super small but they leave the players very exposed to the outside. I would move the spawn inside the building right next to the train to fix this.

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/1276735/Pictures/Maps/hl2 2010-04-24 19-32-06-08.jpg
This spot is a bit crazy. Its a long narrow path and its the only way to the point. This will lead to sentries camping the ever living god out of it. a 2nd path would greatly help.


Lastly the theme feels a bit too realistic. It pulls of the swamp theme almost flawlessly but at the same time some parts look like something out of L4D2 rather then TF2. Try and mix up the textures a bit more.

Oh and good luck with the next version.

 

[Firest0rm]

every time i see the title of this map i read "Carzy Pete's Blog"

it confuses me