CTF WarBorn

Dr. Zombie

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Jun 29, 2010
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Hello there! So I've been working on this map for about a month and a half, off and on, and only just now decided to put it up here.

The map is going to be the first of the maps in this setting.
The first one is CTF_WarBorn
The second one is PLR_WarTorn
The third one is KOTH_WarScorn

I've done a fair amount of work with this map already, but there's still plenty to get done. It's pretty straight forward.
 
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Pocket

Half a Lambert is better than one.
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Nov 14, 2009
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You may want to tweak your light_environment — the first screenshot looks like fullbright from the thumbnail.
 

phi

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Nov 6, 2011
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It doesn't look fullbright but it sure looks fairly bright from the screenies. Lighting can sometimes be hard to judge from them, though.
Looking good so far but I suggest editing the texture scales on those lower cliffs so that the rock texture doesn't look as "stretched"
 

Pocket

Half a Lambert is better than one.
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It's just really bright. There's a few shadows under the elevated tracks and in an alcove.

Exactly. If it looks like fullbright even though it's not, it's too darn bright.
 

Toxindude

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Aug 2, 2012
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Other than the map seeming bright like others have mentioned. I think the buildings maybe to square. Such as more detail on there exteriors. Interiors seem nice but some of the screenshots they feel really open mainly the last screenshot with the red carpet maybe place something in the middle of the room to make it feel fuller I dunno. Good work :)