CP Suntown [Deleted]

[XEnderFaceX]

Suntown - Connect-5 Map

Suntown:
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Objective:
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Fight over the Controll over a small Town!
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Basic information:
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Map type: 5CP
File name: cp_suntown_a1
Developer(s): XEnderFaceX
Release Date: 26.03.2018

Map Info:
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Environment: Alpine, Industrial, Town
Setting: Daylight, sunny
Deep Water: No
Hazards: Enemy Players

Map Items:
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Healthpacks:

Full - 0
Medium - 6
Small - 2

Ammopacks:

Full - 4
Medium - 4
Small - 4

Thanks to:
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TF2 Emporium Vehicle Pack - Square
Team Colored No Entry Overlays - Glubbable

 

[nᵗʰSonata]

Hi! I ran around your map a bit, and these are my thoughts:

I was confused at first when this didn't open, as it seemed like it should; maybe have some indication that it opens after mid is capped? Also, the posts to the right of where I'm standing seem a bit weird; how did the bus get past them?

This slope seems a bit long; most stairways in TF2 have a slope of 2/3, so I'd suggest changing at least this one to that

I could stand right here without capping

This sightline is massive!

This is a pretty long dead end just for a full ammo kit; shorten the path, add a health kit with it, or add another entrance/exit to make it more interesting (I personally think a dropdown would be cool)

All in all, your map feels a bit linear and flat; I'd suggest adding some curves and vertical depth. Putting mid on a hill between 128 and 256 units tall would help the sightline a lot, too. I also feel like how the map is layed out, it would work well to take a 90 degree turn at second/fourth. I did enjoy the detailing, though, and the soundscapes. One suggestion I have detail-wise is to switch out the chain link fences for skyscrapers or other buildings, which would also allow you to create a flank by way of ally

 

[XEnderFaceX]

Thank you for your Feedback!, the Chain Link fences will be replaced in later versions, they are just placeholders for now