Okay, so here are some things I noticed while running around your map.
-No lights.
-No Resupply Cabinets.
-No Health/Ammo Kits.
-Large sightlines,
(One of many long sightlines into spawn)
![20160809203816_1.jpg 20160809203816_1.jpg](https://sjc1.vultrobjects.com/tf2maps-forum-attachments/data/attachments/27/27884-61d3e30c57772dcf5b7373583114872e.jpg)
-No Team Colours on each side of the map (Red / Blue)
Here's some of my Opinions.
-In general, the map feels overscaled, there's many places you can take fall damage from very easily.
![20160809205437_1.jpg 20160809205437_1.jpg](https://sjc1.vultrobjects.com/tf2maps-forum-attachments/data/attachments/27/27886-36d89d97315a50d1ab76a1b332f79d26.jpg)
-These blocks are hard to get up and I think It would benefit the map if they were easier to get up. (If you're not keen on using stairs or a ramp I'd recommend something similar to the prop ramp on mvm_mannhatten)
![20160809203746_1.jpg 20160809203746_1.jpg](https://sjc1.vultrobjects.com/tf2maps-forum-attachments/data/attachments/27/27887-1412cef9721957e4a1e56efa781656e5.jpg)
-I found I ran into the wrong side of this door many times.
![20160809203722_1.jpg 20160809203722_1.jpg](https://sjc1.vultrobjects.com/tf2maps-forum-attachments/data/attachments/27/27888-de5fc6ade16758b72dd7122bec44485b.jpg)
-You spawn facing a wall, not in the direction of any exits.
![20160809203444_1.jpg 20160809203444_1.jpg](https://sjc1.vultrobjects.com/tf2maps-forum-attachments/data/attachments/27/27889-f93825abb33ca82e869b07188d4c6b41.jpg)
-For such a small room, the Capture Zone is tiny.
(Not capping at this point)
![20160809203904_1.jpg 20160809203904_1.jpg](https://sjc1.vultrobjects.com/tf2maps-forum-attachments/data/attachments/27/27890-dd58f16240e71059f201751b58867889.jpg)
-This balcony above the spawn door serves no obvious purpose other than to help spawn campers.
(Clip it off or delete it maybe)
So, there's what I think, sorry if I sound too harsh.