DM wasteland

Discussion in 'Non-Standard Maps' started by TonyMontana, Jun 20, 2015.

  1. TonyMontana

    TonyMontana L1: Registered

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    This is my first map but I kept on improving it to playable and sorta of enjoyable state I would so much appreciate feedback on anything! THANKS!


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  2. Vincent

    aa Vincent 🔨 Grandmaster Lizard Wizard Jedi 🔨

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    You seem to be relying heavily on props. Your maps just a box with a variety of random things placed about, like the badlands spire. It's not a bad first start by any means though, at least your lightning doesn't looks bad.

    I'd say for your next map try focusing on creating a layout, something a bit more advanced than a box and two spawns.
     
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  3. TonyMontana

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    Thanks a lot for the feedback, I know I'm struggling with layouts and shaping brushes! Do you have any good tutorials I can read or watch about this subject?
     
  4. Vincent

    aa Vincent 🔨 Grandmaster Lizard Wizard Jedi 🔨

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    Hmm, well if you're looking for getting started tutorials I'd go to one of these guys. All of them will help you extensively.

    Crash Episode 1 (Setup)
    TopHatWaffle Episode 1 (Setup)
    3Kliksphilip (I learned from him, though a lot of it is a little dated, look round)
     
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  5. takabuschik

    aa takabuschik

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    And don't forget this site's tutorial section, it has lots of great information about almost everything, from technical I/O, gamemode setup, and other stuff, to map design theory!
     
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  6. TonyMontana

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    Thanks! I'll be sure to check it out